Oh boy.

Not sure why he lets them punish him tbh. Magic should stop them from being able to.
Is that going to be explained, or is it just glossed over because you want it to go like canon?

You are absolutely awesome, the undisputed champion of fan fiction. Thank you for this treasure, and I hope God blesses you beyond anything you could ever imagine.

damn. this story was so promising. and then I read "sorcerers stone".

a sorcerer's stone is literally any stone a sorcerer claims is theirs.

a Philosophers Stone is a well known theoretical object in the subject of alchemy. it's an actual historical thing people tried to make.

Please update this story is so good

Harry is awfully stupid in this isn't he? Worse Than the original even.

This is such a good story, you said you were blind too? All the better to truly demonstrate Harry's experiences and responses, then! This is really well written, and it does such a good job of explaining things in a way we wouldn't normally think of them. Thanks for writing this XD!

I think Harry's magic manifesting like that, as a girl, is totally random and weird. Sorry, but I don't like this at all.

Despite the abrupt ending, it is an excellent tale.

Macro evolution is just micro evolution over time, and if the universe is so complex it demands a creator, then said creator would need to be even more complex, so who created it? I don’t know if there is a creator but I don’t think there is myself. But, I can’t give an argument against one to say with 100% certainty that one does not exist, and neither is there an argument that can prove it’s existence, at the end of the day, it’s ultimately up to a person’s opinion and beliefs, to each their own as it were.

So... wasn’t it just a couple chapters ago that Daphne was telling Harry that she loved him? That she was *in love* with him? Yeah, I get it that they’re all only like 14 (13 at that point, I think), but for the most part she seemed fine with the situation with Magic so I’m not really seeing a reason that she would have given up and moved on to the point where it’s seeming as if you’re setting up the story to eventually pair Ron and Daphne instead. I do remember that one part where Daphne seemed sad about the full extent of the emotional depths of Harry and Magic’s relationship, so I guess that could have been the start of the ending of her feelings for Harry, but the way this Ron/Daphne thing popped up in the chapter almost felt—I don’t know, contrived?—to me.

I know you said don’t nitpick the court scene, so I’ll try to stay away from the legality side of it. There are only a few things I want to bring attention to. One: I feel like Rose should have brought to the court’s attention that not once had Vernon ever called Harry by his name, only as “the boy”. It’s logical that it would have been noticed, but I just feel like it should have been brought to forefront of their attention. Two: I feel like it should have been brought to attention that Vernon initially described Harry as a very troubled boy, then later described him as a fine, upstanding boy. Again, it was probably noticed by the court, but I feel like it should have been brought up. Only other things, really, are the fact that I don’t really think Vernon would have been allowed to stop Dudley or Harry from continuing answering their questions, since clearly they’re about to say something that he feels would harm his case—the court would have insisted Dudley and Harry finish answering their questions—and also that the charge of child neglect is more than just a mark on someone’s record and a blacklist from taking care of that child. Maybe it’s different over in the UK—I wouldn’t know—but I’m pretty sure here in the US it comes with jail time.

Anyway, just thought I should note that I’ve quite enjoyed the story thus far, and have no doubt that I will continue to do so.

Hello there, I like your analysis at the end here. It states, however simplistically, that many often fear those different from them. And yes, even though there is no direct evidence that Jesus was a historical figure, there is plenty of circumstantial evidence that lends credence to him being a real person and someone with great compassion and knowledge..

Unfortunately, many of us still get caught up in the us versus them argument. We see it all the time in identity politics. And like your story suggests, it will take a lot of time (sometimess generations) before the lesson gets learned.

Anyway, thanks for telling the story from a blind individuals point of view. BTW, I understand that view probably better than most as I am also Totally blind and have been subject to the emotional "feel good attitudes" of others. There are many authors who have, to varying degrees of success, managed to tell stories on here that capture this viewpoint. Infact, I am trying my hand at writing within the anime world of DragonBall Z and what happened to one of the main characters after the cell games with the retelling of him having been blinded in battle and how he ended up growing from being a kid to a young adult. I am still writing this before I submit. I will have to read the policies and such on here as some of what I might write about could be for mature audiences only in the later chapters.

anyway, if you ever get back into writing other stories around here, I look forward to reading them.

So I'm like super confused. Chp3 A/N you say that you're blind. If you're blind then how are you writing this? Are you like writing it in brail and then having someone who can read brail write it into here? I just don't understand how a blind person could write a fanfic on the internet when they can't see the screen. ALSO I like the story so far.

A good try for a blind!harry story but ultimately a big failure already at ch1 but I persevered and yet still felt the story lacking in so many ways
There’s endless possibilities on how a blind!harry story could be great like for example ”Blindness” did with the colours but wow you go with a physical manifestation to follow him, cringe and a bad addition to the story, you could even do something as cliché as ’feeling magic’ and do better than this