This story has to be one of the best Skyrim/GOT crossovers ice ever read its very interesting how most of this was a flashback or something along those lines but I can’t wait for you to update this really hope you do and can’t wait To see what you come up with next

Please stop beating yourself up and selling your work under its worth.
You write in a fantastic way not many here do and your characters all have depth and understandable thought processes.
Your story is fantastic, interesting and unique in it's quality.

Can’t wait for an update if it ever happens

Pssh. Vilkas isn't that strong. Looking forward to future updates.

Love the story

Amazing fanfiction

when is the next chapter? and exelent work so far

This simianpower person sounds like hypocrite. Lighten up, everyone has a different way for of writing. Why don't you write your own story so we can judge what you find to be great writing. How can the first review I see to get a feeling of what other people think about this story be so angry and stuck up. Keep up the great work author. Good luck writing the rest of this story and don't be discouraged.

Just found this story and could not stop reading. Awesome story and I can't wait for the next update.

"The bright, fiery ball some know as the sun rose in the sky." Yep, and with the FIRST SENTENCE of your story you already lost me. That's a record that's going to be tough to beat, so congrats for that I guess. That sentence is something a 14-year-old who thinks himself clever or creative might write, but it's awful. "Some know as the sun"? REALLY?

Also, your excessively long author's note, and what it contained, would have turned me off to the story even if I hadn't been turned away by the first sentence. Long author's notes are bad. End-before-beginning stories are bad. This whole thing reeks of "I'm so SMRT, I'mma show my audience how it's DONE, yo!" In other words, you're trying to show off rather than tell a story. Starting with the first sentence. Just... no.

And here I thought you were dead.
Apologies if I am counted among the badgers badgering you to update.
Upload when you wish, but please do so within the next month or so if you can!
Great work as always!

Yes finally a continuation to this great story!

Wait...you mean there might be ANOTHER dragonborn in Westeros?
now THAT is a plot twist
Also, don't hate the chapter, it was funny as a filler/tournament one, and left a couple threads hanging so...take your time, and we'll wait for more, because every chapter makes me like this story more!

Damn, Vilkas is one hell of a wingman.

Love the story!