YES FINALLY A FIC WHERE THE MAIN CHARECTER/ERS IS PAIRED WITH JNPR INSTEAD OF RWBY FOR ALMOST EVERY FIC I'VE READ :))!

Its a good story but can you please state which character is speaking when you switch and your pacing seems a bit fast. Also could you diverge a little more from cannon i mean elsa being there in it self should change more of the story than just one extra persons input.

Salem, you screwed up. Wimter maiden powers may be amall fry for you, but winter maiden powers combined with Elsa's powers which can accidentally create hurricanes? you dead.

NOOOOOOO! that cliffhanger...well technically it kinda wasnt a cliffhanger but i wanna know there reactions to elsa's response, dont just leave it like that... anyyyways the story is really good i like how you went with team JNPR ...its different, a good different, because what most authors usually do is put there OC's or other characters with team RWBY one way or another. i love your story, I know its been a little over a year since you last updated, but can you please update...
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pretty please with cookies on top...?

You're story is so greatplease update..

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This story needs a little bit more meat to it!

I like the idea! But its going a bit fast, aint it?

Loving it!

Wonderful story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope the snowgies show up at some point.

this is great.. cant wait for more

This is good plz keep going

Not bad.

interesting story but I feel this fanfic not really different from canon so please more elsa role in the story for next chapter

hope you update soon