Funny, but I don't think this can keep Dick away from trains for long. I mean, this is the guy who goes "trainsurfing" for fun. While blindfolded. I'm not even kidding. :D

I liked how you used a pun for the title of this story and how you literally made this a 'derailed' mission. Puns never get old in my opinion. Plus anything 'punny' is totally Robin :D

I really loved all the Robin whump that we got in this story. Robin definitely showed his experience in the field when he was able to remain calm after being thrown off the train. Also their was some great bromance between Robin and Wally in this! I loved KF's concern for Robin. KF, Aqualad and Robin were all perfectly in character!

I am always a sucker for some Daddybats, so I really loved that moment between Batman and Robin at the end.

Kid Flash's last line had me laughing, Robin especially hasn't had good luck with trains has he?! I loved the reference to Performance!

Awesome job with this story!

Great story, I liked the flow of it, it was clean and precise

cute

That was fun. I liedk the friendship between the three boys

Haha nice story, glad it ended on a light-hearted note.

I love that you took the theme of the contest and made it so literal: a derailed train as the derailed mission! :) Very clever and kind of puny (which Dick Grayson would appreciate). I thought this was a cute, fun story and you managed to pack a lot of action into just a few pages.

I really enjoyed the opening with Robin’s “ow” and his beginning to hate trains (nice reference to Performance there). Also, nice job on the whump – the writing described it very well and created a pretty clear visual. You did a great job of showing how tough Robin is by having him calmly assess his injuries and attempt to move once he heard the explosion – despite the fact he’d just been thrown off a moving train!

Aside from keeping Robin in character, I also felt you kept both Wally and Aqualad in character as well. Wally was excitable in his concern about Robin while Aqualad totally kept his head and stayed calm. I also like that you didn’t have Kaldur speak in contractions, as I’ve noticed that’s an issue in fanfiction.

And you did a very nice job of rounding up the story – a fluffy moment between all the friends as well as a nice scene with Daddybats. Good job. :)

I liked this, your writing is good with just enough detail. It showed us the friendship between them and how concerned they are for each other.

lol, great fic! I would have loved to read more about what happened when they were pulling Dick off of the tracks. the justice league I mean.
great fic! :)))))))
was an awesome read! ;)
-Azilia