Haha, I found a Sonic reference here in chp 2

Thanks for the chapter _.

Really good series, just hope it’s not abandoned, it got me hook line and sinker

Tis a shame this thing is apparently dead in the water. I would've paid good money to see Roman Torchwick's reaction to Ryoji/Thanatos, if that was his reaction to Metatron. He might need a change of clothes, and perhaps consider a career change after seeing the God of Death/Arcana Death in action, or just by looking at him in general. I also would've loved to see the Beacon Academy students reaction to not only the fact that Minato befriend the God of Death himself, but the real truth behind his past.

Great story! I am looking forward to you future chapters when you get the time to write again!

I think the main problem you encountered while writing this was, even though you had a great idea, you didn't know how the plot should progress.

good chapter!

You know this isn't for me, I just wanted to thank you for the first summary in the last 4 pages that wasn't a pile of shit, it actually got me to click in even though I historically dislike persona fics.

Well not gonna read it anymore he made or rather you made a stupid decision like some writers do TELLING A SECRETin this case your in another worldTO A STRANGER.

Really no build ups just tell your secret its really a fucking stupid move.

I'm not gonna say anymore of rants. Wanna know to remedy this you CAN tell them but be CRYPTIC, use RIDDLES, DOUBLE MEANINGS or EVASIVE ANSWERS

*poke sadly* I'm out of chapters :(

I'm not sure how viable your outline for this story is given that RWBY's on volume 6 by this point, if you've made changes to reflect canon, or just stopped writing this altogether, or what have you. But even if you went with the wildly-AU-uses-OCs plotline you had at the time you finished this chapter, I would like you to know that I would /absolutely/ love to read that story, and I really enjoyed what was already here so far. Kudos!

hey so your fight scenes are amazing and Glynda's assessments of everyone ever are very on point *thumbs up*
also this was a few chapters back but I really liked how smoothly Oz introduced Minato, just, walk on stage and talk out of his ass but no one questions it to his face X)

And yet another amazing fic that gets lost in the limbo of disappearing authors,

Such a shame, these 4 chapters are great

...Hobbes? Tiger Faunus?

Sorry for asking, but are you referencing Calvin and Hobbes comic series? If so, that's amazing.

And the author was never heard from again! Medic and Heavy laughing intensifies

Seriously looking forward for more. Minato has seen and faced worse. I just hope he grows strong enough to face Salem as well and this gets updated in the future. Hope he won't be handicapped by the Evoker missing. Thank you for the story. This was a wonderful read. I enjoyed the character interactions.