damn! -covers nosebleed- me like alot

This was a very satisfying read...! I really enjoyed the writing style and the vampire/human dynamic you wrote for Kakashi and Iruka! Will you ever reveal how Iruka is able to resist the allure? My favorite scene is when they were in the cave and Iruka offers his cut hand to Kakashi... That conversation with "Devilish Man" was VERY GOOD... Thank you for writing this and sharing 3

I can only say that I have become a fangirl

This was an AMAZING fanfiction. Your work is very good! :)

That was pretty bloody intense.

Usually I'm not into vampires (except for Spike -), but your delightful style held me captive until the end! "the cry of silken fabric being shredded" - I simply love that one...

I don't have anything negative to say! There were a few misspelled words, but without a beta that's to be expected. Each word and phrasing had me captivated. I thought I'd just read it idly when I had nothing to do, but I found myself hooked and suddenly at the end! I think I am now going to work my way over to your other material. _

very very nice

Love

The seduction game between Iruka and Kakashi is very sexy and intense. I love the way you describe them in an another century, in an another world different than the ninja's universe. it's very well written.
Thank you

-sneaks in and steals story, running into a dark corner to read the yumminess- Bout time heheh

Oh my. Time for a cold shower after that one.

WOW! I have waited for this chapter and it was worth the wait!

(big grin) Welcome back. So happy to see you update this. Certainly brings more closure than the second chapter ;) Good work, author :D

Wonderful story. In fact, the picture you paint of the romance you portrayed leaves realistic versions EXTREMELY lacking. All in all great job.