| Reviews for Price of Power, Value of Justice |
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goldenhue chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Please continue! |
TheFirstVirgo chapter 2 . 10/22/2017 ahh! where's chapter 3? pls continue this! |
Batboy86 chapter 1 . 5/5/2016 In the name of the Dark Knight and the Lady Wonder. I demand that you update this. Pls? |
The Sulkier Clown chapter 2 . 4/4/2016 Alright buddy. You know what I think of it already, but who doesn't like an extra 1 on that review counter? But yeah, good stuff man. And you know where I am when Chapter 3 is ready. Just don't forget mate, its your story, I did nothing on any of that, I just helped you arrange some of the words. Although the rest of your statement 'bout me I'm not about to argue with. In fact, just put that paragraph from on repeat a few times and post that as your Chapter 3 would you? Haha, I kid. But seriously mate, keep it up! |
Zenness chapter 2 . 3/31/2016 I like where this is going, I can't wait for Bruce to meet Diana! |
Judy chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 I like your twist on Bruce's life and can't wait til he meets Diana. I will patiently wait for your update. |
Two-Eyed Charlie chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 Mighty fine chapter good sir! I enjoy seeing where you'll go with this new version of Bruce Wayne, as well as how the League will function with someone who's far more...strapped for cash, shall we say (if a billionaire can even really be "strapped for cash"). The League interactions are also fun to read (dammit Ollie, watch yourself). Just a couple of typos, as has been pointed out before, but like I'm one to talk. Keep on writing! |
theamerican91 chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 Good to see Oliver still has the ladies man attitude about him. Interesting to see if the rest of the league's personalities are similar. Did like the brief scenes of Lois. Curious to see how Bruce meets up with them. Could see either he comes across Diana Prince as Bruce Wayne and they start a relationship and he accidentally discovers the truth. Or maybe he decides to be Batman on his own using Queen's technology. Waiting to see how this story progresses. Also waiting to see if there's a main villain overarching plot or if it's just about Bruce joining the League. Whatever you do its your story and your decisions. I'm sure you have a decent idea how to proceed. Good luck |
theamerican91 chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 Well this is the first fanfic I've read in four years let alone review, mainly because I was so busy I had only time to write and not read. Still busy as ever but decided to make time and try to start reading again. After all it's hypocritical of me to ask others to read my work when I don't read theirs. Well anyways your premise caught my eye so I decided to give it a shot. Like the premise of Bruce not only having to earn Batman but Bruce Wayne as well in this story. There doesn't seem much stories that focus on the corporate aspect of Bruce and it'll be interesting to see business savvy Bruce. It seems Ollie though is playing more the playboy role this time which should be interesting. Normally I like Bruce becoming Batman for Gotham first not the League but again this is an AU so a different story to tell. I do like how you give hints but not enough information. You don't need to go into detail the entire roster of this continuity's Justice League in the first chapter nor go over the Green Arrow. Only complaint is a few typos hear and there and a little too much telling and not showing. Don't worry I made a fuck ton of those mistakes when I first started and I still make some of them today but I believe with continue writing you will refine your technique. Good luck |
psychedelicbubbles chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 Interesting so far! Look forward to more. |
CrazyPhenom chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 Alright, nice job subtly showing what the world thinks of the superheros in your continuity. And the league meeting, nice. Are they the league yet, as in the name, because I suggest something that starts with "merry band of". Hey, you have a continuous Bond reference in chapter titles, Robin Hood ones are completely justified. |
DDLo18 chapter 2 . 3/29/2016 I really like the direction your carrying this to. However, Bruce must be naturally strong if he's able to carry a 200 pound guy for 50 stories and still be considered out of shape. |
OnlyYouAndMe96 chapter 2 . 3/29/2016 here's my mandatory review buddy! looking good, keep it up man! |
tedpierce18 chapter 1 . 3/14/2016 please this looks good keep going |
Ni Castle chapter 1 . 3/12/2016 I'm intrigued. Keep up the good work |