Please update, I love it

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

please update, it's brilliant

really interesting!

Love it, looking forward to more.

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Hello, good story I hope you're still active, and it's not canceled!

if you allow me to write down some points you have a little longer the chapters if you are going to tell a great adventure story you should do it but if it is not so do not do it is your decision!

Some clarifications Jon is looking for answers I think you should make him finally know the secret so he can make his decision. jon is aegon VII, since reighar already had a son named of that name aegon VI with Elia Martell, something I recommend you is to change that name is very repetitive, change it by "Jaehaerys" is better besides the initial one agrees with the initial of his name "Jon Jaehaerys"! Jon is not a conqueror nor does he want a throne, he is more a stark than a Targeryan will be but they have blood on him.

Jon is not someone who ambitions thrones or crowns, that's why his ancestor Jaehaerys is better. So do not go to be that from one day to another is thrown by a throne that is more than obvious does not want to have, give adventures, send it to Essos, go to bravoss, Lys to free cities or with the golden company, conosca the world, send it to asshai where you will find a dragon egg, you name your dragon as balerion, meraxis or vahegar as the first conquerors Targeryan, you become a true rider as the ancient lords of Valyria, they were riders not kings , the crowns are not for a dragon, a dragon rider is someone free and he can be free like a dragon rider but not a king, the crown is an ambition and corrupts.

Finally, it is impossible that varys know who is the son of raeghar and lyanna, it is a secret is very safe and only 2 or 3 are the ones that are told when knowing the secret, unless varys refers to him as to Eddard, not There will be problems, but since Raeghar's son can not know it, the gods know it was a miracle that Brann and Sam Tarly learned of the secret. that is why without a valid argument it is impossible to know that secret.

Another thing to clarify is that in Dorne, the Martells hate rageghar Targeryan because he is responsible for initiating the war that led to the death of Elia Martell, oberyn told Tyrion, that they despise Raeghar and if they find out that Jon is his son, not nothing will change. Neither Oberyn nor Doran feel more than contempt for the prince and for Lyanna because Elia and her children were killed in a war that cost her to sleep her army and that the cause of all this was raeghar Targeryan and Lyanna Stark, abandoning their children and family for a prophecy.

It may be that Jon Swon did not have the cell but, "All the sins of the father are inherited by his son" sad but it must be, remember that it is a world in a medieval era and injustice, death and betrayal is part of everyday life .

i love this story...i hope it is finished oneday

In the previous chapter you used "" in place of a quotation mark. Measter Maester

Nobody in winterfell knows about bael being the Starks ancestor. It's a wilding-only song.

hope to read more.

I love this story. simple but very informative and even though it's missing quite a bit details, as in shirt chapters, I like that it gets to the point. I also am curious to learn more about how Wylla acts around Jon as I've never seen her for than only a few chapters in other stories. here's to hoping for an update.

next chapter!

continue please

You finally updated, I love your story please keep updating