| Reviews for A Pawn in the Sand |
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   jingerr chapter 4 . 3/20 oh no I'm falling in love with the book but I see it hasn't been updated since 2018. I read your one piece book and saw this one. |
| RulerOfCats chapter 22 . 1/12 Thank you so much for writing this. I didn't know this was what I needed to read until I started it. Everybody is so well developed. I love every character, and I love the complexity of the plot, the intelligence in the politics, and everything in between (like the humor) I cannot wait for the next chapter! |
| RulerOfCats chapter 16 . 1/12 Akira is legit hilarious. He needs to have his own series. I'd read dat sh!t |
| seaswimming chapter 22 . 10/22/2019 I enjoyed this story! I’m interested to see where you will take it. Perhaps a time jump soon? Looking forward to an update! |
| SecretNerds chapter 22 . 6/8/2019 I love this story! I really hope you continue it! |
| BlueberriesGoneBad chapter 22 . 5/13/2019 Please update! I love this OC character. |
| oki-wan chapter 22 . 5/8/2019 Sweetheart please continue with your story! I love your characters and the interaction between them! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2018 I reeeeaaaaally love this story! I can't wait to for the next chapter :) But as always, take your time, Author-sama. |
| LadyAmazon chapter 22 . 9/2/2018 *firm nod* Neji does have awesome hair. Akira is beautiful and deadly! Poor Hitomi-chan was very flustered in this chapter. I knew Tomato-sensei liked Michiko! called it! |
| chubber chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 wrong story idk how to delete |
| chubber chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 One more thing... you can help Xanxus work on his problems without making him feel like a completely different character. You put him on a path to becoming just another Mary Sue and took away most of what made him a unique, exciting character. Working on your personal problems is usually a slow process but his change was pretty much instant and that made it feel like you just replaced him. He seemed so real and human before with his struggles but in your attempt to go deeper into those you kinda minimized those problems. Honestly it was kind of disappointing. I hope maybe one day when you're better at writing characters you'll rewrite this because it's a really great idea |
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 22 . 8/23/2018 nice chapter. can't wait for the next Steel Heart chapter. |
| saipher1303 chapter 1 . 8/23/2018 Just read the description but somehow i think you watched HunterxHunter. |
| AmericanNidiot chapter 22 . 8/22/2018 This chapter had me giggling like mad. |
| CrystalVixen93 chapter 22 . 8/22/2018 Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz |
