Reviews for All I Want
necahuala chapter 16 . 14h
I really love your story! It was super realistic in the way you portrayed the fríendgroups. I don't really know if you read reviews, but I would love your thoughts on whether this one thing was purposeful or a happy accident.

Everyone, both in the story and in the reviews seem to be on Harry's side. Like, other than the Professor, who we can agree is a huge dick, all the characters firmly believe that Harry is in the right. Like, Hermione not defending the Gryff team to Michael was a dick move but a very normal one for a teenager. Hermione's relationship wasn't meant to cause offense, but bc it hurts Harry, everyone turns against her. It really reminds me of the way they treat her in the book. None of the things she did wrong warranted the disdain she received. To all the reviewers who thought Harry was a saint: y'all are falling into the nice guys finish last mindset. Just because a guy is nice to a girl doesn't mean she owes him anything. Harry's feelings for Hermione did not mean she had to reciprocate or not date anyone else- especially since he didn't tell her!

Overall your story was fantastic! And so real that I found myself analyzing the characters like I would my friends!
alerd chapter 1 . 9/12
holy cow. this was the greatest harmony fanfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading. just wow..
BerserkLittleCook chapter 17 . 6/9
This is a complete story. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. It's got an ending, a resolution and all that jazz. I don't know why it's not marked as complete. Maybe someone wants to fix their typos or something.
Seriously, just mark the story as complete already! Wanna write an epilogue? Do it! Want a sequel? Sign this and call it done! I very nearly missed on reading this because I was afraid of not getting resolution. I got it. And I'm so happy I could ride a pig!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/5
Daphne made Harry a bit more SLYTHERIN.
Faizus Ibn Newaz chapter 3 . 6/5
This is so cute.
qdBEEbp chapter 17 . 5/11
I am totally stunned by the fact that this absolutely beautiful piece has only been able to earn 333readers marked as favourites. It is so well and beautifully written I believe I am unable to construct a proper comment to express my own feeling after this incredible roller coaster ride, I think it’s safe to say it has definitely earned a place in my heart. I will admit the Harry here is a bit too perfect, but who would say no to a gentleman Harry? The different stages of their relationship and also the transition in between, the straggle between stage close friend and couple are so realistically written, also the transition from one protagonist‘s point of view to another are also satifactorily smooth; the Daphne section is really refreshing although at first I thought it was Ginny or Luna who use Polyjuice Potions to “help” as they had discussed in the end of chapter 9; to have a Slytherin student sitting in the Gryffindor table is such a symbolic idea that I believe JK Rowling herself somehow would like to achieve as well; at last, as others have already commented, I too was hoping to be able to see juuuust a bit more after their first kiss, but this ending is perfect in its own wayThank you again for writing it.
PkScholar chapter 17 . 4/24
Ugh. So much angst but so good. Love this fic
Night-Stryder chapter 17 . 4/18
In you’re story and you’re “I’m not the only one” you make Hermione both lovable and also someone I hate she always hurts harry and yet it’s not completely her fault tho in this story she annoyed me far more I wanted them to just get together it was frustrating they didn’t I couldn’t understand why harry didn’t just tell her damn the consequences if she was hurting him so much I legitimately believed at a point it might take a dark turn and harry would just kill himself if it went on any more either that or kill Corner which I would’ve wanted actually
Night-Stryder chapter 10 . 4/18
Don’t know if you’ll read this but you are a legitimate masochist why do you always make you’re stories so painful (p.s I’m hoping that Corner gets legitimately murdered)
Guest chapter 17 . 2/25
I just found this story and I'm loving it. So many chapters made me cry (which is great) but I'm glad this chapter has ended on a light and hopeful note :) thank you!
AlmightyChanicus chapter 9 . 11/22/2019
Funnily enough, I'm in the exact same position as Harry rn
Loreechan chapter 17 . 11/22/2019
It was great! But wished Harry didn’t let hermione off thr hook so easily.
ijen524 chapter 17 . 11/15/2019
hioe you choose to finish this fic someday. was beautifully written and had me in tears. simply amazing
Saito chapter 17 . 10/6/2019
I know that the pain in a story makes the highs feel even better but, fuck... It HURTS when i read these stories where hermione breaks harry. It of course only matters on the well written ones, and yours is great but damn.

I really appreciate getting to read through your stories over the last couple days. Thank you.
Canon to Fanon chapter 10 . 7/26/2019
Beautiful twist. Hermione get ready for your days of jealousy. it's on bitch
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