This was excellent! I suppose you could have ended it after the first chapter by having him open the gift and making himself be heard. I personally think she made it obvious why she was ending things, so he had to know she wanted more. That said, I like the second chapter a lot. I guess I was a little confused as to why Astoria was there though, seemingly because he was supposed to be going somewhere with her. Was he actually dating her when he had so recently been trying to propose to Hermione?

Absolutely beautiful! Can’t wait to read Draco’s POV! This needs more recognition!

Absolutely Loved It! A delicious treat with a great great ending xx

Loved the story. The ending was my favourite part.

Now it's one of my most favourite stories...!

I already read it and just came here to sy it's brilliant..you are excellent girl..!

Omg, I loved it! Very well written and I can't wait to dive in to the Draco's POV

Great story!

This work is definitely one of the best that I've read so far

This would have been the perfect story if you continued writing it.

Also, the image of her pacing and drinking scotch and soda was great- it made such a clear picture and her narrative throughout was awesome.

Wow! I kind of love this! The angst is totally on point and the characters’ choices make sense- this feels like plausible and earned angst. I was confused where she went from talking to Pansy to being sick- one or two transition sentences might make that a little clearer while holding Hermione’s confusion. I thought the way you wrote in the pregnancy while talking around it was brilliant. Thanks for sharing your story!

wonderful, i could read this again and again

I just absolutely love love love this story! Can't tell you how many times I've read it and Draco's POV! Anytime I'm at a lost on the next story to read I always come back to this one!

Oh this was brilliant. The sadness in it, the love, the FRIENDS. But best... Lucius and Narcissa, omg, i’m dead. The ending was perfect. “Bollocks” hahaha so good