Believe me when I tell you I know exactly how you feel. I've been there and I stopped my own story as well give, the circumstances. It's okay to let it down now. Like you I don't have the enthusiasm to continue my story. And admitting that is no shame. Good luck on your next story.
Saluut.

It's not really clear why Blake changed her mind about helping Weiss. Maybe the guilt, but that didn't get her to have Sun travel with her, so I don't know.

I understand, it's a shame to see you lose enthusiasm after coming this far. But in the end fanfiction is supposed to be something the reader AND author enjoys and if you feel that enjoyment leaving you it makes sense to end the story.

If it's not to much work, is there any chance you could make a post which contained all of your plans for the story? I'd appreciate knowing where the story was going to go and the planned ending.

Writing your take on Yangs abilities / how Raven figures into it was intriguing. Especially in a way most have t thought of it. I think it serves to differ itself from canon Yangs training while also feeling true to her character. Also it was a nuce touch for the last line.

Interesting chapter... still not a big fan of the fact that Best Mom seems willing to help Yang in a way... yeah I hate her that much. But good chapter.

I really like the interaction between Pyrrha and Cinder, hope we can see more.

Holy plot twist!

That was so sad :(

but also a fun read. I actually liked this part much more than i thought i would. It gives more light on Cinder and just what her relationship with Em in your story is. It works. As does Mercury who has more dimension than i thought he would. I liked the gaps you filled with whats canon to work ib your story but not feel out of character.

Nice, I enjoyed the Emerald perspectives, you did a great job filling in the backstory. Looking forward to where they go with it from there...

Mercury was right.

Its all good to keep continuing. It feels nevessary to get your take on Emerald. This chapter was interesting and actually eye opening honestly. It felt right.

Flashback arcs are great

Nice, I like what you're doing so far with Emerald's backstory.

Very interesting is an understatement here and well done on keeping with the main canon.

I'm happy you updated. I'm sorry for the late review. You finally cleared some things up which was good to read. As for the other parts, Jaune now finally confronts Emerald, Ruby tries to find a way. I just don't get it.

She knew what would happen. Still, she ran. I'm not bought by the story of the horrors. It was a lot but I'm in for more. The cliff hanger was really hard and did a trick.
Saluut.