Ah! I really liked this short! It was so sweet. Also the ending was well executed. Even though it was short you did very well putting together a storyline. You also captured the flustered nature of Sam's thoughts well. With the cut to dinner being a clear way to show how he was very "in his head" so to speak. I really enjoyed it!

Super cute! I hardcore ship Sam/Eileen, but there's hardly any fanfic for it (yet), so I was really glad to find your oneshot. I think you captured Sam and Dean's characters really well, and I especially loved this: "This is probably what normal brothers do in their normal lives and it's just kind of eerie." Such a Winchester thing to say.

Gaaaaah I can't handle how cute this is. I love it!

This was adorable lol. I loved it terribly. And I really ship Sam and Eileen, maybe even more than I ship Sam with Becky, so that makes it even better. And Dean's response was so wonderful. That's probably his most standard big brother reaction ever. I think you should write about Sam bringing Eileen over to the Bunker for supper and how the three of them get along as a family rather than a group of hunters working a case. Dean would embarrass the crap out of Sam lol. I can see it. But this was just great.