Oh, but this story is a PURE gold. There's something undeniably enticing about the forbidden fruit and your characteristics of both Gomez and Morticia are simply superb. I'm absolutely in love with that story, I will surely re-read it like a thousand times.

And what a beautiful command of language, a pure pleasure to read.

This. Was. Beautiful. I enjoyed this so much.

I soooo greatly adore this fanfiction. You have such nice references to the musical, and really love your depiction of Ophelia. Although, I've only ever watched the 1964 tv show version of her, so idk where you got your inspiration from-but it's damn good.

I love this depiction of Gomez and Morticia. It's so true to them-the indescribable pull between them, the depth of their attraction-I love it. Also the depiction of Morticia and Cleo is soooo beautiful! I appreciate the view of Moriticia feeding that poor mouse to Cleo.

Thank you for writing this-I enjoyed it profoundly.
Deets

This was so lovely
Isso wishi i'd been here while you were writing to encourage more of the fun nearly plotless chapters
All my love

This is absolutely the most wonderful Morticia/Gomez story I have ever read. You are very talented writer, your writing is so beautiful and engaging.
I adore how you presented both Morticia and Gomez, they are so in character but at the same time your very own and they really came alive in this story. The way you present their relationship is absolutely delicious, I have really enjoyed this story. I was almost sad when it finished. Fanstastic work!

Wow man this is fantastic

I think your username is very apt... I am a little obsessed with this story and the way you write Morticia and Gomez! Absolutely loved it, off right now to see if you've written any more, very much hoping!

This is the best fanfiction story I have ever read, I can wholeheartedly and sencerily say. It's truly beautiful, and fits these characters perfectly. Bravo! C'est magnifique!

I love the diction and slow but thorough development of your writing. This is a wonderful piece.

What an amazing history! One of the best I've ever read.
You had captured them very well and the plot and wtiting is amazing.
Thank you very much for sharing with us. I hope to see more of you :)

I can't believe someone wrote a multi-chapter story! thank you!

love this story but wish you would update faster / more!

I read this in one sitting. Insightful plot and gloriously written. Well done!

I truly love the final, what a lovely chapter, even if it feels too short, I think it ended the best way its possible.
Thanks a lot for give to the world your endless talent at writing. And thanks for this beautiful story.
Hope isn't it your last story of The family Addams.

Perfectly, darkly romantic; and a remarkable combination of earthy and sophisticated. (And you worked in, "Oh yes, completely." Such a great line.) A lovely job. I will miss having updates to look forward to.

I'm so glad you've finally posted this! It wasn't what I was expecting but I loved it anyway. I hope there will be another story soon.