Do you ever think about using Shathra as one of your Villains in one of your stories? I remember how tough she was during JMS run( Greatest run in Spider-Man History) except for OMD an continuity problems with Sins Past.

Great story, can you please continue it

Great update man. This story is as thrilling as ever. Nice job. Judging by the fact that the Avengers heavy hitters are currently out, this is the most perfect opportunity for Peter to escape.

Couple Questions:
What exactly is Peter's strength level and in this story?
Will Peter eventually reencounter his handlers from Hydra?
Will Madam Webb(Julia) make an appearance in this story?
Will you have Bucky and Peter have a throwdown eventually in this story?

Nice update sir. Carry on

You know I think I remember this one story called A Web of Love :Rewoven. They had AIM splice Natasha and Peter's DNA together in order to get around that issue with Black Widow not being able to have kids. You could ask Ghost kaiser 23 and his Co author GreyKing 46 about the details of how they came up with the Idea. Just a thought.

I hope Spider uses the Mark of Kaine/Spider on somebody in the story. Any chance of him using that illusion ability he used in Grim Hunt that was only used that one time?

Cool start, I like it. I was imagining if the story would be as good or better if Cindy Moon, "Silk" was in the place of the current character alongside Spiderman, just now in my head.

Well, I've read up to the latest chapter, and I'm left wondering why every girl in the harem is hooking up with each other before Peter even has any chance of forming a bond with one of them. Peter's been trying to escape with little success, and only Franklin, Valeria, Kitty and X-23 have befriended him. I really want to see this version of Spider-Man strike out on his own without the Avengers having him on a leash to see what he'd be capable of.

Good chapter, you have a few mistakes like spelling or using the wrong words, and you have a few punctuations you need to fix. I like the section; it is straightforward to read.

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Hey its nice to see you back on track with updates. Anyways you have lots of stories right can you make one where peter can use magic like dr strange like peter infusing his webshooters with magic would be dope and op.

This gritty version of Peter is well done (as always)! Such a joy to read. I find it so very interesting to watch people's reactions to his violent manner of things. Adding the Red She Hulk is something I am hyped for. Never have I seen her in anything like this, and I'm super excited to see what you do next. Is Peter maybe warming up to the folks around him (not actively trying to off them) or is he just waiting for his time to strike (like this invasion)?

This was a decent chapter