Hey! I'm new to fanfiction and I just published my first story :D I love your stories, and it would mean a lot if you read my stories and gave some feedback or suggestions. Thanks! :)

This was incredible...so amazing. And I LOVED how Zoom was Barry from Earth-3; genius. Just pure genius. But, just, wow...I could so easily see this happening. Or well, happened. ;) And that was also genius about the whole Hartley thing; I would have never have thought of that.

And it's so unbelievably hard for me to think that this could have all happened if he had just shown up a moment earlier...unbelievable...but you wrote it perfectly. I, too, loved that scene, but was curious as to what would have happened if he would have come just a little bit sooner. Now I know, lol. ;) This was beyond words great. Amazing. Stupendous. Just downright perfect.

Thanks for giving me the honor of reading it. ;P

Me again, nitpicky reviewer! Sorry about that last review, I sent it before I read your disclaimer on the bottom of the chapter! I'm so sorry, I really really like this story, you are amazing and thanks for sharing! :)

Um, I don't mean to be nitpicky (because this is fiction and also a really awesome premise) but parallel worlds can be, in theory, accessed by either travelling faster than the speed of light or through a singularity, which in the case of the Flash was the singularity found in the black hole so actually, the source of the breach was indeed the black hole :)

But this is a really good read so far! Thanks for sharing it with us :)

Don't forget to make the story completed. I can't believe it, I actually made it from the beginning of a story to the end! Now you need to watch Naruto . believe it!

You sneak. When did you update this chapter?

WHY, why must all the gud things come to an end... I just want to say that it truly was fun reading this story from the beginning thank you for this amazing story I enjoyed it a lot..._

Definitely want to see you soon,! U r a wonderful writer! Could v have a sequel on how Barry is dealing after coming back . Or maybe completely different Story from you... anything will do! Keep writing:-))))

Wait...wha? What?
THATS IT?
Nooooooooooooooo!
*sobs in agony*
I need more Jay Garrick stuff to sustain my broken SnowJay soul.
Epilogue please? Or a sequel? Yes yes yessssss a sequel will do just fine :)
But no matter what you do, I'll have to say I really loved this. Thank you for sharing this with us.

oh plz write an epilogue I still can't believe it's over I enjoyed it from the 1st chapter to the last and evey time the suspense killed me...hehehe but it was really fun reading it

Oh...it's sad that it is ending! Loved your story so much! Do keep writing n giving us wonderful stories more! Will wait for the conclusion!

So...
Zoom's dead and Jays alive!
*throws glitter*
Yesssssssssss my adorable little Jay Garrick YESSSSSSS HES ALIVE HES ALIVE HES ALIVE :)
Whoooopiiiii! Looking forward to the next chapter of this, the final chapter.
It's been a pleasure reading this. To be honest I don't really like ending chapters but at the same time I love them because the writer actually finished the story!
So kudos to you :)

Why! Why! Oh well those questions will be answered in a couple of days. Sorry I got so late to reviewing but...life happens right?

Awesome update like always. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

it keeps me on the ede of my seat...can't wait for a new update _