I’m totally crying over this. But god!Natsume is totally one of my favs and I loooooooove the promise of thiiiiiiiis! Though I was crying throughout Natsume’s failing health. *sobs*

Great story!

Wow... it's nice to see just how much Natsume affected those around him, to see how much they loved him back. :)

Beautiful and sad.

This is making me cry in the middle of the night...

This was an amazing read! You captured the tone of the series and the characterizations perfectly. You did a fantastic job of incorporating Natsume's spirit in each section despite his body failing. I've never read a Natsume story from Madara's point of view (admittedly, I haven't read many), but it was very fitting for this case. Wonderful job! I'll come back to this story again and again.

Yato! Natsume asked help from Yato OMG this subtle hint got me read like twice! Anyhow, it's such a good bittersweet fics I've ever read . Keep on writing more on natsume yuujinchou fandom dear author!

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story. The name fits natsume so well. really really enjoyed reading it so thank you.
P.S. Whenever I see the ALS all I can think of is One Piece and if you watch it then you probably know what I'm thinking of.

I love Human Mask to bits! So as expected I love your story too XD

I've developed quite the addiction to Natsume-turns-into-a-God/ayakashi

Those feels stabbed right in my heart, like big time. You almost made me cry! I love Natsume! This was so amazing!

Oh man I was so so so close to tears reading this if I hadn't been listening to happy music there would have been waterworks. Well done! If you ever post your version of God!Natsume I think I would cry. If it's different enough I don't think it would be a problem to post it without Haru-san's permission (especially since God!Natsume could be considered a general trope which was also technically done in the Houzukigami episode), though it is considerate of you to ask her anyway. Story has been favourited and I think I'll follow you as an author, too! Seriously can't wait for me in this verse!

the world need more natsume yuujinchou fanfiction and a season 5 of natsume yuujinchou anime

This fanfic is so sad but sweet at the same time. Can you please make another fanfic for Natsume Yuujinchou like this again?

I love human mask! I think she'd be flattered there's fanfic of her fanfic. As a reader, all the more stories in this vein the better. And as she hasn't been around for a while it's probably not unfair if you posted the sequel. Im sorry Im just being a greedy reader and wanting more to read cuz there have been no updates basically. What does Yua mean? And I have no idea what kinda illness als is.. Natsume is such a gorgeous being spirit and soul and if he dies no doubt i'd see him becoming something other than human. He's too beloved not to be. Enjoyed reading this and hope to see more ficcage.

Oh my! There is a sequel of this so very wonderful and bittersweet story? I will surely check it out. I don't usually read fics with character death, but this was good.