Bill is the oldest Weasley son not Charlie.

Digging your story so far. You may want to just check some of your grammar. In this chapter you used the word 'lied' instead of 'lay'. Lied is past tense for lie. You need, "Sirius LAY with his head in her lap" not lied.

greeneyedsam: I'm loving ypur story so far! it is very well written. Just one small critisism, checking little details of the canpn story makes things flow better, Bellatrix's husbands name is Rodolphus not Robert.

After all this time I finally find this. Please keep more coming. Possibly a Tessmort story sometime?

So emotional.I still love the story. Hope you make more with Tess’s character in different timelines. I hardly see any like this.

Ahh poor Tessa has the survival instincts of a lemming :)

I adored this story and I'm also loving the sequel. I started wishing Tessa was canon! Also very upset by the ending lol. You write so well, thank you for a phenomenal story.

already love the character of tessa

I just wanted to say...
This is one of the best fanfics that I've ever read. It was put together so perfectly and I loved it. It normally takes a lot to make me cry. Yet, I was an emotional wreck at the end. I've read this fanfiction about 3 times now and I'm going into time number 4! Just Don't forget to keep writing because you're a natural!

one of my fave fanfics so far

:)

So I cheated. I simply had to know if Tessa lived, and I feel like you've just bludgeoned dies. TESSA DIES. I need time to process this.

In the mean time, I think I'll head over to Suri's story, because that's gotta be happier, right? I'll probably come back to this story and finish it some other day, but I doubt I can stand the heartbreak.

You write wonderfully, keep writing!

I have the worst feeling ever that Tessa's going to die, and that this is going the canon route, with the exception of Suri Black. Sirius is already suspicious of Remus, and gosh, I really want this to be AU, haha.

I love your action scenes, they're the best.

I'm back after almost a year, and gosh, I didn't realise how much I'd missed this fic. I almost don't want to read it to the end, because then that's it, there's nothing more to read. I love how you write Sirius. And Suri is just adorable.

- gr8rockstarrox (yeah, I changed my name.)

This was an amazing story and I want you to know I am now in tears as I finished this story. You are an incredible writer! Can't wait to read the sequel!