Talk about saddenningBut really good fic though!

Noooo! THIS IS SO SAD!

This is sooooo sadd :(((

Oh wow...! I really do enjoy- (no) LOVE these little snippets we are hearing from everyone, its fascinating what you come up wit! (I hope to read another POV soon!) And maybe... Maybe we can see a side story of Frisk going around to the others dreams (or something) to watch over them. I feel they'd be very surprised at everyone's change. (If not understanding to some extant.) Papyrus is the biggest change so far. (That's for sure.)

... poor, broken goat-mom...

What is this I see-

A GOOD STORY somehow found its way into the Undertale section. I'm floored.

Wonderful characterizations by the way. Sans and Tories are spot on, Papyrus... well, he lost his sweetness, which is a pity, but comprehensible. Also I like imagining Alphys finally winning at life.

I feel so sorry for Toriel; she probably isn't hallucinating about Asriel's voice...

Please continue soon c:

I love this idea. It's sad and all, but it's great.
I look forward to more. :)

This is a very unique idea you have here! You really captured the characters, and I like how you set up the post-pacifist ending. Maybe after you cover everyone else's (ie Undyne, Alphys, Asgore, and maybe Flowey/Asriel) you can bring Frisk back? No matter what you do I'm sure you'll do great!

Emotions like I wouldn't believe! Ooooh! I hope you'll pick this up again from everyone else's message POV's later! (Pleas?) Its so amazing!
Plus, that end though...
Gave me some chills, it did! Just- danm... O_O

You got Papyrus down to a T. Do Toriel next

No, goddam it, you don't get to play with my heart like that... *cries in a corner* (but honestaly this was really well written, I could totally hear sans voice it, I really liked it)

... that last bit is so cute to me for some darn reason.

can frisk come back? please?

Wow... THAT IS SO AWESOME! I love it.

really hope there is more