loved it

GAAAAH your writing always makes me feel so full of emotion! I feel both happy and sad reading this. You did a brilliant job capturing the Doctor's determination to remember Clara. I love this idea. And the Osgoods' gift of a picture was GENIUS! Now the Doctor can have a picture of his beloved Clara forever. I love this story a lot and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

So sad. I like Osgood too. She is such a great character. thanks for the chapter.

So bittersweet. Poor Doctor. thanks for the chapter.

Hi, I love your story! Very creative.

I don't think plugging Bonnie into the telepathic circuit would have worked, as she doesn't have Clara's memories (presumably) but him wanting to shows how much he wants to find her, and he's grasping at straws at bit.

If you are trying to stay with the Doctor's pov through the story, you have a tiny slip out of the his pov when Bonnie reflects on loosing her sister. I noticed because I suffer the same slips in my writing! You might fix it by having the Doctor reflect on how she looks, and imagine she is thinking those things, I.e. 'she probably knows how I feel because...' he is quite perceptive like that, so would be plausible.

I really like this story and can't wait to see where it goes next!

No Doctor it wouldn't have worked. But at least he has a picture of her unusually wide face that needs three mirrors.

Ok, you managed to make me cry with this one. Oh dear!
It seems I'm still not over the ending of season 9 :-).
Thank you for your story. Keep going!

Sad but hopefully better times coming?

OMG my feels! I love it so much! The woman is either Clara or Me.

Good chapter.

I am in love with this story. That rarely happens since most stories I can just see where it will lead and it becomes tedious. I hope to see another chapter and may your muse forever live.

Wow, this is excellent! A beautiful idea, too- I definitely can envision Twelve using his diary to try to remember Clara through. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.

Adding this to the community now! :)

Nice. Stories like this, even though it is not cannon, help us fill in the gaps with the aftermath. thanks