Is that the end? That makes me a little sad, I read through this too fast. This story was a roller-coaster of feels. I loved it, hated it, and cried. Thank you.

Oh thank goodness, Frisk is finally, /finally,/ out of there, my gosh. They're safe. Finally. Right? I mean, they've got a ways to go, but their father won't be able to hurt them anymore, right?

Amazing fanfiction, just absolutly- I don't even know the correct word. It's just awesome, and it evokes such strong emotion from the reader (or at least, from me). Just, great job. A

Oh thank goodness. Thank you. They loaded their save. Thank you. Goodness, this is just...messed up. No one deserves that sort of thing - least of all Frisk

Ohhhhhh fffffffimmmmmmm ohhhhhh shiz-sprinkles ohhhhhh dear, mmmmffffffffffff-

Oh hmmphfiiillmm. (My method of stopping myself from cursing is muffling myself, and I often type like how I talk so ya, you get muffled curses in text form) Hmmmm just hit the fan. No, that's incorrect. Hmmmm hit the fan when Frisk's /father/ first started abusing them.

Sam sounds like a pretty okay guy, so far. He sounds at like he at least cares for them

Thank you, thank you, /thank you/ Mettaton! Agh, I just- thank you. Gosh, why can't everyone be as nice and caring as you? Amazing chapter once again!

I was just thanking the governor over and over again for defending Frisk and cursing /Elizabeth/ over and over again for not being able to just call them Frisk because you don't just- if someone introduces themselves as something, call them that unless requested otherwise!
I introduce myself with my full first name and then, if I become friends with them, then I tell them that /then/ they can call me by a shortened version of my name - and if someone calls me by the nickname before I give them permission, then I ask them to not.
And people respect that, as everyone should - you can't just force someone to go by something that they're /not./ It's just not /right!/

Can I please kill him? Please?

I'm so so so SO glad the Frisk has their friends to help them out - I'm sure that they're going to be life-savers pretty soon.

Poor poor Frisk, I've never been that sick that I can remember, but it sounds absolutely miserable. *hugs close and gives medicine*

Agh, it pains me to know that some people actually have to go through with this sort of thing - not the monsters and all, but the abuse. And from your family no less, the very people who are supposed to care for you! It doesn't matter if they're the people who you were born to (your "real" family) or if they're the people who you surround yourself with, they should care for and protect you, not hurt you!

Sorry for the rant, I just had to let that out. Great chapter! I'm excited to read the rest of this :3

I'm. Gonna. /Kill him./ NO ONE has the right to treat ANYONE, /ESPECIALLY/ not a six-year-old (you said that they were to be seven in three months, right?), like that. NO ONE. Gosh, do I want to teach him a lesson. Great chapter once again, amazingly composed!

Finally, Frisk is in good company. It'll do them good to stay away from that thing that calls itself their father.

I'm going to punch him. And I will take joy in it. So much joy. And I will comfort Frisk, say that they're amazing and beautiful and great - because they /are./ Great chapter!