Whelp Pyrrha has gone from spooky ghost to creepy-maybe-evil-maybe-yandere ghost. Swear she trying to get Jaune killed so they can "be together"

It's okay, I didn't really want to be emotionally-stable any time soon.

I've been looking for this story again for a little while now. It stuck with me the first time. Still does.

Well done, chief. Loved it.

I was transfixed by your tale from beginning to...abrupt end. You wove such a gripping character study of Jaune, and his growth through Remnant's End of Days. I've never seen a story in the FNDM that portrays Pyrrha as you have, and that's something I say as very high praise; its actually difficult at this point in the FNDM's existence to find something that is completely and wholly unique.

Your decision to make the ending something that we, the reader, can only speculate on is a highly risky move. I won't lie and say that I'm 100% in love with the idea, but I do respect it, and I respect the courage it takes for a fanfic writer to do such a thing. As a result, this story will definitely stay with me for a long time, and its definitely going on my favorites list.

You've crafted a piece of work that stands apart from the crowd, and for that I salute you.

Oh my gosh, this was such a heartbreaking and lovely story. ;-; Thank you for writing this! While we have closure, it's just so painful and emotional to me. Gah, the writing, the story, the concept... It's just perfect! I hope something like this might actually happen later in Volumes, but yet I don't want to go through the same heartbreak again. ;-; Thank you so much for this beautiful story, and excuse me while I go cry.

Just so you know: I hate you. I mean, I love you for writing this, but ending this like this... Damn, son.

This was a trip. I really hope that you do finish this in a sequel, because this was amazing.

I'm glad you ended it on that cliffhanger. As I said in my last review, him seemingly finally letting her go and moving forward, all while the world is ending, is an emotional high that couldn't be beat if you continued it.

I love how the first two chapters work. They fit how you felt, and worked great with the story and narrative. You certainly achieved what you set out to do with Pyrrha, and the reviews about her certainly show it.

This was a great story, and definitely one of my top favorites post volume 3. Actually, it made be THE top favorite of mine for fanfics post V3. The atmosphere, the narrative, the mystery on Pyrrha's intentions, and the ending, all work fantastically to give us an emotional high that I still get when I re-read the fic and its ending.

So, once again, absolutely fantastic job! Loved the story, loved the emotion put into it, and definitely loved the ending!

but is this story over? what was the ending here? the story seems incomplete.

Alright, so let me start by saying this one was one of the best stories I've read here. This story really hooked me, it had me sitting there my eyes glued to the screen and frustrated as Fwhen you left it with a cliff hanger. Ok, so I won't keep talking about how great your story is. What I really want and what I know other people want as well is to know what happens. Dude you left me really Fannoyed with how it ended, and don't take that in a bad way. It shows how good of a story teller you are how much People want to keep reading your stuff, but PLEASE don't give us another inception. We need closure man.

Oh my gosh I only just got to finishing reading this now and wow. Such a beautiful story, and it all came together wonderfully in the end. I absolutely loved it as Jaune came to the conclusion that Pyrrha wasn't helping that much, that he needed to stop clinging to her, and that he needed to move on.

Thank you so much for the story, I really, really enjoyed it!

That settles it. I'm putting my bets, that ain't Pyrrha. Or, at least, not the Pyrrha he knew. I'd held suspicions, but it seems his little ghost is pushing him to death, chase for glory, "he's invincible", better than everyone else. As if she's trying to corrupt him slowly, and it seems to be working.
Maybe I'm wrong, maybe this is Pyrrha, and not some trick, but I'm calling it now, it's either a psychosis or trick by Salem.

:)

is it a end chapter...?

Wait, "The End"? As in, the actual end, not the normal "End Chapter"? Is that it? If so, well then;

HOLY SHIT.

This fanfic, this STORY. What a ride it was! Every chapter had its own atmosphere to it, and you could FEEL it. From Jaune's ramblings, to everyone else dealing with loss, to Salem and how you handled her, even to Pyrrha herself and her actions and motivations.

If this is truly the end of the fic, what a way to do so! I LOVE IT! In some sense, I hope it IS the end, as there's not much else to go from here. From the very beginning, it was about Jaune not being able to let Pyrrha go, so to end it with him finally realizing this and finally doing so, that's an emotional high that can't be beat!

Absolutely fantastic job, mate! Amazing in every single way possible.

I think I would have preferred it if he'd chosen to die with her. The ending doesn't seem to make sense to me.

Also, though it's not entirely fitting, this song reminds me of this fic a lot:

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