The beginning was quite interesting until you started to add more OC's and adding a Twin sister for Ruby was just too much.

Keep up the story mate, this is quite promising.

I don't get it, with that firepower, they could actually carved a kingdom/nation of their own.

I was pretty hype for this until around chapter six when the OCs teleported to remnant by the truckload. The whole being transported to remnant thing loses it's charm when it keeps happening, or it's an open connection.

By not including Britain, you have insulted us. How dare you! You shall be shot and executed !

War Thunder fan? Same here. PM me at Spartan Golsan-017 if you want to squad up. Also tell me what tier are your countries for Ground Forces and Air Forces because I only have Tier 4 air for America and tier 2/3 tanks for America, with tier 3 German Air/Tanks. Russia and Britain, tier 1 tanks and air, and Japan at tier 1. Other account is tier 3 Russian tanks with tier 2 air

Cool chapter you got here, things are wrapping up fast. I hope to hear more from you.
Saluut.

Kickass, cool. I hoped you could make the song longer. I'm also a huge fan of Sabaton. But why couldn't Ruby understand it? I mean, it's English.
Whatever, it's great.
Saluut.

Flak 88 even fucks up future vehicles

well...it's interesting, but seemingly too op in a way, id put a cap on how much they can spawn in a day or something

This seems a bit...um...rushed...Maybe improve on it a little bit? Most of this story seems a bit rushed...

I have to make a reupload because the Symbol that shows the reader that the character is speaking russian is gone. Maybe i shouldn't have used the email symbol.

Da sind 2 Dinger, dass die Erfindung mich interessiert.

Zuerst war, dass diese Erfindung in Deutsch war und es ist eine Komödie.
Die Grammatik braucht Werk und du sollst die Story in Absätze aufteilen. Wenn du langen Sätze schreiben, es aussieht chaotisch. Verwendet mehr Punkte und nicht benutzt ,,and'' mehr als zweimal in einem Satz.

Ich hoffe deine Story und Schreibfähigkeiten verbessern.

I did my typical writing mistakes like beacause