Omg this storyline was great but it needs more to it. Please finish this storyline. Thank you just when it was getting really good it ended .please add to this storyline.

wow great story cantvwait to read more.
please continue really enjoying it

Love this story so far. Sure wish you’d update.

I hope you continue this story

Enjoy the story far

Please update! I starting to really love this!

Ok, I started liking this story when I first started reading it, but from this chapter, I really start to hate the way the story is going. It looks like both Christian and Ana are pushover, come on who in their right mind would just keep quiet when someone is forcing them to go lunch, that is a bit pathetic isn't it. And as for Christian and Elena, he is even worst in this story, when Elena says jump, he says how high. I think I am just going to stop reading 'cos it just ruins the real image of Christian and Ana in the original book, they were not pushovers, especially Christian. But it looks like you are going to ruin that image so I would just go and find another story that doesn't have cowards and pushovers.

time to slap the shit outta Jack!

Slow and Steady anyone? This story is plagerised.

Had some problems with the chapter.
Christian would never let Elena control him like that and why would he answer her badgering questions about Ana?!

I was disgusted by this chapter and I refuse to invest anymore time in this rediculous story. You have both Christian and Ana acting like pathetic lap dogs, it's sickening to read, both of them licking Elena and Jacks ass. Why don't you have Elena and Jack put leads on Christian and Ana and get them some dog food and a kennel.

Is that how you want to portray two great characters... Being useless and total lapdogs.

The story is called. Ana and Christian - Stole my heart. More like Ana and Christian- eat shit and lick ass.

You said its no BDSM. HowElena fit in this story?

Oh please keep going. I don't want this to end.

I hate when writers make demands of readers. I've been a writer, I know what it's like to crave followers and favorites, but I always cared more about getting reviews and since guest can leave reviews, I would never demand my readers to log-in. Sometimes ppl have to use insecure hot spots for Internet access, which isn't safe, but it's worse if the log-in to any type of account. If that's a requirement to read your story, then I'll have to pass, which would be a shame as I've been enjoying it.

I also tried to find you on Pinterest and searching LilyLilac1 doesn't work.

Slow and Steady anyone? This story line is copied and is considered plagiarism. I have reported it.