Reviews for Kid Loki (Moved to profile Omniva Verse 42) |
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alicia7788 chapter 6 . 4/11/2019 UPDATE PLEASE |
lilyflower101 chapter 6 . 5/13/2016 Danny Phantom! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/13/2016 You're a disgusting person, what the hell is wrong with you and this spanking shit? Hitting a kid is vile, you'd rotten in jail in my country! |
Super flash chapter 5 . 4/24/2016 That was super flash ;) hardy har har-anyways loved this chapter! I really like the teams and I like where it's going! It's cool that they will still have the originals together sometimes, I'm a little confused in the beginning though. I'm going to have to look up nova XD |
lilyflower101 chapter 5 . 4/24/2016 I hope for your butts sake he doesn't check the security footage. |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/24/2016 Update soon please:) |
Magamines chapter 4 . 4/21/2016 Best Loki/Father/Son/Mentor out there. Keep up the good work! Loved the CP scene, Loki tried so hard to get out of punishment and failed . I love seeing the actual Loki coming through here & there having real feelings or resentment & atonement. Having a guardian is wonderful, I like the way you compare/contrast his life with Thor/Odin VS now Maybe with punishments there can be rewards too! I'd love to see him get a heartfelt gift from someone |
Ace chapter 4 . 4/21/2016 I would stick to marvel. It's gonna get too crazy and hard to follow crossing so many characters. It's already a stretch with the justice league and the avengers. Just a thought. You has something good goin here |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2016 I love the parental care that is heavy in your story.. I hope in the end Loki will not only have new friends but maybe actually become a true hero. He will always be the trickster, but for the right reasons. His mind is still very childish. I think it's like a second chance to grow up, he never had friends or a father figure to nurture him. It would be amazing to see the Avengers in the end, realizing who and what Loki has become. Maybe here will even be a revelation where his friends see who he really is and still stand beside him when the avengers come. |
lilyflower101 chapter 4 . 4/21/2016 Hopefully the bully won't bother them anymore. |
katenigma chapter 3 . 4/10/2016 I absolutely love this story! Not only is it original and refreshing, but I absolutely love your writing style. Loki is not out of character like he often is in other fanfictions, and I love how you portray other characters. I cannot wait for your next update, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. I am definitely checking out any other fanfictions you've written. |
19-1037992 chapter 3 . 4/9/2016 Please update. I love your story. I can't wait to read more. |
lilprxcious chapter 3 . 3/15/2016 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON PLEASE LOVE IT |
QWERTY chapter 1 . 3/13/2016 UPDATE AMERICAN WARTS |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/8/2016 Update soon please |