This was freaking EPIC! And i normally don't even read stories with 2p, also damn, talk about psicological torture, i almost pity Luciano...hopefully he will have his redemption arc in his future

I've reread this at least 5 times and only now figured out why she was getting Alex memories. She used America's blood which makes her a 2p. Alex blood would create a counterpart for Alfred. I think. It makes sense.

You have watched Kyokoom64's videos!
Finally I'm not the only one!

Ghosty here,

I'm only half way through the first chapter and already freaking out. I saw Alex and was like " Yay I like that name alot better than Allen“ Then I saw Seigfreid [I can't spell] and started silently screaming, either you watch Kyokoon64 or saw it somewhere and i'm freaking out for no reason

I really enjoy reading your story, and this is my first comment so do not take it bad.
FUCKING Oliver, he should remain death, through all the story he manipulates everyone around him. FUCKING PSYCHOPATH. I feel empathy for Luciano, I'm crying for him right now.
In conclusion awesome story.
PD. I hate Oliver

I cried.

Love this story very excited for sequel

I'm actually crying right now! A sequel to my favourite Hetalia story is coming and I'm so so happy! Thank you so much!

thanks so much for continuing this! this is honestly one of my favorite hetalia stories ever. looking forward to the spin off 3

i'm re-reading this for who knows which time and i just wanna know when is the sequel going to come out it's been like 5 months and i just

Hey! When are you able to start up a new story! I'm really wanting to know, cause it has been months ago since this ended.

Hello! I think it has been a little over a year since I've come back to this fic. Over the course of that time I have moved on to other fandoms like Voltron and such. It's funny, because I actually woke up randomly at two in the morning a few days ago, suddenly remembering how I never finished your story. Believe me when I say it was painful trying to remember the title. You have no idea how ecstatic I was when I saw the completed status on it.

Your writing still amazes me. Oliver's mind fuckery, Lilith's philosophy, the 2p! FACE family dynamic, all are so interesting. Your interpretation of Alfred made me so angry back then, but now, being more removed from the fandom, he's one of my favourites. His internal struggles throughout the story were realistic to his character. I love the action, the way you describe each scene really gives weight to each punch thrown. And that ending! Oliver is a brutal, sadistic genius. I can't say Luci didn't deserve it. I like how you sprinkled humor into it here and there. This is Hetalia after all. The OCs were nuanced and developed, and I particularly liked Val (especially love the fact she and Ollie became somewhat friends over tea lmao).

The only complaint I have is how much physical descriptions you gave her. This might be me just being dumb, but during her exchange with Oliver after he revived I thought Oliver was still naked up until you offhandedly mentioned his shirt(?). Yet I could picture Lilith's appearance in more detail than I needed. Just small things like that, if fixed, can help the story flow a bit better.

I'm pretty sure your fic single handedly dragged me back into Helltalia, but I'm not complaining. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and I look forward to any future projects you decide to bring to life.

Oh my god, this story's the olivers true intention, gave me chills. I'm sad this story's over but it is easily one the best I've read in a while
Good job!

Please make a Sequel or a Prequel or a Spin Off or One Shots about the 1p vs have a beautifull writing Style and your version from the 2p Charakters are much better than other 2p Fanfiction on this Website.I hope you write more about the 2p or about 2pUS1pUK.

Best Wishes
Tiesa

PS: sorry for my bad english if I have mistakes I'm sorry about this but I'm from Germany and Englisch is not my firstlanguage.

OHHHHHHHHHHH THIS ENDING IS BEAUTIFUL! And I loved your quotes! So I thought it was really fitting to put a quote like you did in the first few chapters. I really look forward to your future projects! I feel like you should do all three, but starting off with a sequel would be really nice! Cause you get more nation's and (hopefully) the other characters Lilith knew, ( I still felt like Dr. Lang should have been more understanding about the nation's, I really like Lilith in the end!) And after that maybe a prequel or spinoff? You did mention the 2ps chased the nation's into an air vent, ever since I heard that I was interested in that( Not really anymore though). Your words changed in a way. I look forward to see your future projects.

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