interesting!

I love this story but it's been a while, are you still plaining on continuing?

this is confusing so is Thedas and Tamriel on the same planet or not in your fanfic. because in this chapter talks about different world and in the previous chapters Iron Bull knew about tamriel. this is confusing

stupid that you put Thedas and Tamriel in same planet. would have been more interesting if the divines sent her outside of Nirn

really hope that in this fanfic Tamriel and Thedas arent on the same planet.

would have liked more if mc was the only one in thedas from nirn

ok this is awesome! I wasn't sure if I was going to like this story or not but I was pleasantly surprised about really enjoying this. Not Going to lie I hope one day she puts The iron lady in her place. But keep up with the good work!

Oooo I guess they recruited the mages if there’s a time skip?

Never a dull chapter. Keep it up!

I’m loving this fic so far! It’s been a while since I read a good crossover fic and this is pretty awesome! I find it funny that she’s a cook and just blasts people’s impressions of her away when they find out she can fight extremely well. :D Interesting way she was incorporated into the Inquisition. I can’t wait to read what happens next!

"Oh that?" Lenora hid her sudden nervousness with a smile, "I was the Champion of Champions in the cooking contest of Cold Harbor. It's a small fishing village with the most delicate and delicious shrimps. A pity the fishwives are zealously guarding their shrimps and are quite wary of outsiders. Becoming Champion of Champions is easily the greatest achievement of my life, even if nobody else knows about it."

Or she might have said something like that... if she was a character in one of Varric's stories.

how does one kill a god? long answer with an amulet of power and really just knocking him out for a few minutes. somehow doesn't sound quite as impressive though.

great chapter :) it was a bit harder for me to read at the end (not a fan of discord between my otp) but it makes perfect sense. i might not have played eso, but bethesda games were always so... blase about killing. even about betrayals and datk rituals. things that would be horrifying in any other game are somehow acceptable in skyrim, oblivion or fallout (possibly thr reason so many people go get the daedric artifacts). and in thedas, you don't even outright kill people like servis or alexius, and have the options to stop solas from killing the people who just tortured his friend to death.

so yes, i can see where the differences would pop up. still want them to make up fast :( especially if aedan went for the mages, which means this world's lenora will likely spend one whole year / until end of her life withiut resolution.

...unless you have other plans for the red future?

again, thanks for writing this, i enjoy this story.

Very good story so far.

Great chapter, love the direction this story is going in, also I too hate Fallow Mire.