| Reviews for Celestial Tale |
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  Little Liar chapter 5 . 8/30/2019 This could be better. |
| Chara chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 Who is the Celestial King? |
 a3Md6jw chapter 5 . 6/10/2019 OMG THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE CONTINUE IT IF YOU CAN PLEASE 3 |
| Snas chapter 5 . 4/15/2019 PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| WowohWow0 chapter 5 . 1/25/2019 Chapter 6 coming this way please say yes |
| Dragon of Creativity chapter 5 . 1/21/2019 This is good, whens the next chapter coming out? |
| ShippingGamer1605 chapter 5 . 12/10/2018 Please update this! Even though there are some grammar mistakes, this story is terrific! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2018 great prolog! |
| Robot Sparky chapter 1 . 4/29/2018 Not sure if this was intentional or not but Asriel's name is spelled with an s not a z. But again I am not sure if you did this intentionally. |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 5 . 1/23/2018 LOVE IT! |
| Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 12/25/2017 I thought that Frisk was going to be the mage/wizard. |
| hjoshua481 chapter 5 . 11/14/2017 Like the story so far, can't wait for chapter 6. |
| Nihatclodra chapter 5 . 9/14/2017 ... It's always rather annoying when authors give characters "sure win" abilities and then have them lose anyway because of something as useless as plot convenience... It's a fanfiction, it's meant to be DIFFERENT from canon by definition, there is no reason to stick so close to canon aside from lazy writing... I'm not meaning to flame you or anything, it jsut really annoys me when fanfiction authors do that... |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 5 . 8/17/2017 Cool story continue please. |
| ATToriel chapter 5 . 7/20/2017 Please update |
