Reviews for Bits and Pieces |
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StarlingChild4 chapter 7 . 2/23/2019 These are all so cute (and sexy)! |
Blount64 chapter 7 . 1/8/2017 Well things sure did heat up during that encounter. You have to talk to your partner. They don't know what you like or don't like unless you say something. |
Blount64 chapter 5 . 1/8/2017 Everybody first time isn't always one that you want to remember. That was funny. |
Blount64 chapter 4 . 1/8/2017 Lol, heated and funny. |
Blount64 chapter 3 . 1/8/2017 planned parenthood , nice |
Blount64 chapter 2 . 1/8/2017 That's a nice way to beg and say you are sorry .Nice |
Blount64 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was great! Just right. |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/31/2016 Something went wrong with the chapter when you uploaded... |
Layla347 chapter 5 . 8/31/2016 Nicely done |
Scarlet song Cerulean trails chapter 4 . 8/31/2016 YES! I CAN READ IT NOW! So cute...and hot! ;) Inu being shy about it too, just like how he would be. But I was laughing out loud when Kagome's grandfather was like "put on a shirt young man! if I can stand the heat fully clothed, then so can you!" XD It was so perfect, just like something he'd say. *laughing while shaking head and crying laughter tears* I loved it all! I would totally read a whole story of this InuxKag couple if you ever choose to write one, even if you reused these chapters that you've already written as some of it, I would still read the whole thing! PLEASE think about it, I would be sssoooo happy if you did, but I'll still fall in love with all of your writing for this fandom even if you never make a whole story just for this couple of your creation. Your fan, Scarlet song Cerulean trails |
Scarlet song Cerulean trails chapter 5 . 8/31/2016 Something's wrong with the story, there's a recurring text that is not your story everywhere and it's impossible to read what you have written! Please fix it so I can read your story! Scarlet song Cerulean trails |
VEENA4 chapter 4 . 7/30/2016 OMG! That was... LOL! :D |
VEENA4 chapter 3 . 7/30/2016 This is an emotional one!.. Loved it!.. Simply superb!.. :-* :-) |
VEENA4 chapter 2 . 7/30/2016 It's really sweet of him.. to say sorry & unintentionally hurts her.. & Her... She's also loves him...so forgiving.. :-) |
VEENA4 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016 So...romantic & pure sensual!... |