Reviews for Bits and Pieces
StarlingChild4 chapter 7 . 2/23/2019
These are all so cute (and sexy)!
Blount64 chapter 7 . 1/8/2017
Well things sure did heat up during that encounter. You have to talk to your partner. They don't know what you like or don't like unless you say something.
Blount64 chapter 5 . 1/8/2017
Everybody first time isn't always one that you want to remember. That was funny.
Blount64 chapter 4 . 1/8/2017
Lol, heated and funny.
Blount64 chapter 3 . 1/8/2017
planned parenthood , nice
Blount64 chapter 2 . 1/8/2017
That's a nice way to beg and say you are sorry .Nice
Blount64 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was great! Just right.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/31/2016
Something went wrong with the chapter when you uploaded...
Layla347 chapter 5 . 8/31/2016
Nicely done
Scarlet song Cerulean trails chapter 4 . 8/31/2016
YES! I CAN READ IT NOW!
So cute...and hot! ;) Inu being shy about it too, just like how he would be. But I was laughing out loud when Kagome's grandfather was like "put on a shirt young man! if I can stand the heat fully clothed, then so can you!" XD It was so perfect, just like something he'd say. *laughing while shaking head and crying laughter tears* I loved it all!
I would totally read a whole story of this InuxKag couple if you ever choose to write one, even if you reused these chapters that you've already written as some of it, I would still read the whole thing! PLEASE think about it, I would be sssoooo happy if you did, but I'll still fall in love with all of your writing for this fandom even if you never make a whole story just for this couple of your creation.

Your fan,
Scarlet song Cerulean trails
Scarlet song Cerulean trails chapter 5 . 8/31/2016
Something's wrong with the story, there's a recurring text that is not your story everywhere and it's impossible to read what you have written! Please fix it so I can read your story!

Scarlet song Cerulean trails
VEENA4 chapter 4 . 7/30/2016
OMG! That was... LOL! :D
VEENA4 chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
This is an emotional one!.. Loved it!.. Simply superb!.. :-* :-)
VEENA4 chapter 2 . 7/30/2016
It's really sweet of him.. to say sorry & unintentionally hurts her.. & Her... She's also loves him...so forgiving.. :-)
VEENA4 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
So...romantic & pure sensual!...
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