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Awesome story! I really love how nicely put together your writing is. And your stories ideas are good too!

That's it. No part 2?

Damn. What a great one-shot; would love to see this evolve into a full-length fic. So many unanswered questions:

How did Jake know where to find her?
Would Alec ask her to join the Volturi again?
Would she say yes?
Would she say no -
If no, would they get in an argument, ending with Alec demanding her to come, causing her to be angry and disappear (not power wise, but leave the city)?
Or...
Would Alec be upset but accepting of her decision, go back to Volterra where they don't meet for decades, until they run into each other when Alec is on a mission, she saves him then runs away.
Or...
Will Aro find out that she ran away from the Cullen’s and orders him (for some odd reason him and not Demetri) to bring her to Volterra - because he is curious or because the Volturi heard of a threat against her and they want to protect her - causing her to run, Alec chases her which would last decades, where they end up falling in love.

You're a great writer. This is the second A/R fic I have read (oddly enough, both well written and both one-shots). FML SMH

LOL. The fic is Little Red Riding Hood and the Red Eyed Wolf, it’s on this site (if you’re interested).

I could see the Cullen’s acting that way towards anyone who doesn't act the way they believe they should. Poor Renesmee, that’s a terrible thing to go through. Losing a child time after time and finding no sympathy or concern for her well-being.

Any well written A/R fics you would recommend? I usually go for OC/Volturi, but I might have to check out Renesmee fics now.

I love how she’s unapologetic and strong. Something her mother is not – at all – in the books.

Such an brilliand story...
Heartbreaking,but exceptionally beautiful.

Please continue this as a full story, because I really love your work.