Wow! Just wow! I know you constantly say you are not a writer but you should be very proud of yourself for creating such a wonderful story. I have fully enjoyed binge reading this fic over the past week. Thank you for publishing it again for us to enjoy!

I stumbled over this story and I'm so glad about it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I couldn't stand away from it and read it in two days.

So after reading your intro, I was worried that your writing would be as bad as you were lead to believe prior to taking your stories down. After reading the first chapter, I want to let you know that your writing is fantastic, beautiful, and well crafted. I am a picky reader. I often abandon stories after the first couple chapters if they’re not well written. So trust me when I say, your story has blown many others out of the water just after the first chapter.

I really loved your story and I am following your sequel. On your advice I did go and read all the Mercy Thompson and AlphaOmega stuff over the last few months. I'm hooked on all that now too. You did a great job writing a Killian and Emma in that werewolf world. Thank you for sharing your fiction.

So- um I can't keep reading. I might be stupidly obsessed with Fae lore, and crazy fond of werewolves and vampires but I can't keep reading when you completely ignored the only consistent thing in Fae lore. The rules regarding Guesting. So I get you have plans and they were testing him, but this is the only thing that stays the same, they could not mess with him like that while they were guests, it would be offensive to their honor. Now if he had been else where, not on David and Snow's grounds, yes, but in their house under their roof, no. so, yeah. read up on fae a bit more before you write them again.

I totally think Snowing are Emmas parents in the story. I really like all the body language the wolves use too and how August is cowed from across the room.

This chapter was so good. You know there is a humor in your writing that you do really well. Reminds me of randomsquare's stories. I love the whole wolf posessiveness thing- you're mine. And that the wolves are a whole separate personality.

oh I really like the scene with Killian barging into the room in wolf form. i wonder what the significance of sniffing her neck is. Also it's really interesting that the Wolf has it's own mind and ideas like he can't really control it.

This is a great beginning to the story. I'm looking forward to finding out Emma's relationship to Ruby. love the action packed writing with the perfect amount of insight into each character's motives.

Yeah...you don't get it do you. Updating an old story with an author's note. Not cool to those working hard on new material and again not allowed on this site.

I do not know if my previous post went through, but I wanted to be sure that you knew how much I have enjoyed this fic. In fact, I am currently re-reading it in anticipation of the sequel! Please, keep up the amazing work!

I am so happy that you are writing a sequel. Currently, re-reading to first... Super psyched!

You might want to check this sites guidelines/rules. No author's notes, announcements etc allowed. Do you know why? If everyone did this, old stories would bump new content. You could forever update something with a sentence that has already been completed and read. I'm just a reader who feels for those that have worked weeks to produce new content and then get bumped by something like this.

So this is an old completed story? Are you adding to it or bumping those authors with new content to promote another story? That doesn't seem fair and I'm confused about what your posting cause it says this story was completed awhile back.

Jfc rando guest reviewer, literally the update is letting you know that there is more to this story, wtf are you so upset about?

Anyway: OMG I’M SO HAPPY YOU STARTED WRITING A SEQUEL. It was weird because I had just been planning on re-reading this fic (I re-read my favorite fics like they’re books) on the day you published the sequel. Now I get to re-read it knowing there will be more 3