It...it's over?

What?

-blinks slowly-

WAIT. I HAVE BOOK 2.

Okay, I love how you wrapped this up - loved Anna being so supportive, loved that heartwarming talk between AxEl, and of course Sora in all of his derpiness. This was fucking awesome. Alas, worried about Hans big time now. Was hoping his ass would've been locked up for attempted murder but - nope. He's gone. Like some demon in Supernatural.

Might wanna ring up Sam and Dean.

This was a fun read! I loved it so much! I can't wait to start Split Ends! 3 Thanks so much for writing this and I love every AxEl idea you have! 3 I'm so glad I met you when I did, and am so proud to have you as my Elsa. 3 I love you so much, Sis.

~Rayne

Wait, it's over? Oof. Short chapter was short. But it was still beautiful and I loved how the Keyhole was hidden under that one clump of snow. It was so pretty and amazing! I'm just really happy that Anna is okay! But oh gosh, what's gonna happen now?! I'm so nervous to find out!

~Rayne

OH MY GOD, HANS YOU DOUCHEWAD. I JUST WANT TO YEET YOUR ASS. UGH.

I was sooooo happy that Anna hit him with the baseball bat. Then I legit wanted to screech as he attacked Elsa. Then, of course, I saw this happening but ya know what? I like your events so much more than the actual Arendelle world in KH3. XDDDD Jus' saying. It's more fleshed out and fun. Also, I really love this story. I'm sorry I took so long to really just... get into it? It's amazing! 3

Oof. Okay. Two more chapters. Let's do this!

~Rayne

-reads first tidbit-

-INHUMAN SCREECH- A X E L!

-goes back to reading the rest-

OH MY GOD JUST - JUST - THIS WHOLE CHAPTER? ALL THE FIGHT SCENES. ALL OF THE FIGHTING, ALL THE BAD ASS MOVES, AXEL'S LINE ABOUT HAVING ONE CHAKRAM. JUST AAAAAAAA.

Then, then, Iduna with the fucking bat - and Olaf stopping her - and the Kristanna subtle hints - and omg I feel like Elsa's old man might ship her off to a certain institute like a crazy person. AND NOW ANNA IS ABOUT TO DIE AND SHE'S RUNNING TOWARD THE DANGER. AAAAAAAAA.

-infinite screaming-

~Rayne

OH MY GOD. KRISTOFF WITH AN ICE CLUB? BADASSERY AT ITS FINEST. .MMMM. That boy needs one officially. I'ma write Disney about it. Lawl.

Okay but the first scene? in the gym? I lowkey am wanting to vomit for even liking how adorable that was? Manipulation at its finest. Friggin' ass. Ugh, he makes me wanna hit him.

I was so sad when I read the part with Marshmallow carrying the three of them, and I'm over here like "Axieeeee come baaaaaack" which of course, he didn't, and IF he does, he's gonna be making some grand ol' big entrance like the big dork he is.

MARSHMALLOW. I legit screeched at the brutal fall of our beloved snowman, also gave him a eulogy out loud to which my son gave me a weird ass look for doing, but moving on. That fight scene! All of Sora's spells and their descriptions! Creepy Hans' puppet is from a fucking horror movie! Kristoff bashing heads in! ELSA BEING A QUEEN AND SLAYING. Be still my heart.

OMG THAT LAST PART? LIKE WHAAAAT?

-FURIOUSLY FINISHES REVIEWING AND CLICKS NEXT CHAPTER BUTTON-

~Rayne

OH MY SWEET LIGHT.

The way you wrote Mal was just OOF. My heart. I could hear her voice in my head and Hand hot OWNED. Bout friggin time.

Oh my gods, the Troll is the Hobo. That was fucking great. XD at first I was like “Hagrid?” Then I realized it was Troll Dude. He was... Er...cryptic. And creepy.

Ugh. Fucking Hans. Just die already you turd. Also, Elsayou really got a silver tongue on you and that lashing you just gave Axel? Kinda harsh. He’s not NOTHING. He’s just...

Empty.

Anywhoo, Elsa’s battle armor? BEST MAGICAL GIRL TRANSFORMATION EVER.

I’m so ready for this.

~Rayne

OH MY GOD. THAT REVEAL THOUGH. THAT SAVE. THAT BADASSERY.

Goddammit, Axel. Once a bad guy, always a bad - wait. No. I don't believe that. I believe he has his attachment to her - even if it's not emotional. He still has thoughts. An imprint. I refuse to believe Axel doesn't care on at least an intellectual level!

ugh my heart hurts. Especially at the end with Anna.

ima go cry myself to death.

~Rayne

Mother - he evaded the fireball?! WHO EVADES A FIREBALL THAT EASILY? YOU LITTLE BITCH. TAKE THE FIREBALL IN THE FACE LIKE A MAN.

"Or we could simply beat the shit out of you..." My god, my man, my KING. Slay, Axel, slay. You go boy, you tell that pompous bastard where he can take his blackmail. XD Ah, I love Axel. So much.

That bear is REALLY similar to the Hans' Wolf Heartless in three. More scary though. Yeesh. Hans' darkness really is twisted. Asshat.

OMFG. ELSA. -angry beaver screeches in the distance and clear across the continent- HOW COULD YOU?! ELSA.

-furiously clicks next chapter button-

~Rayne

Oof. So much happened in such a short chapter! I loved the ambience of the building, the quick thinking of Axel and Elsa, them holding hands -squeeeeee- and of course, Hans getting a fireball shot at him. And I love how it was like a flare and now Anna and Kristoff can come help Elsa! This is a kickass story!

~Rayne

I love how you write Sora. You really capture him so well and he makes me grin. I love, love, love the unique way you included Goofy, Donald, and Jiminy in this and how Sora explained everything so casually. I also love that meeting Sora has given Elsa some resolve and fired her up in being on board with using her powers to help people. Axel's kind of an ass, but when isn't he? XD

This was my favorite chapter so far. I don't know why? I think cause I really love how you wrote the three of them interacting. Plus, oh my god, I know EXACTLY what picture you've seen to use as that photo of the Destiny Kids.

Amazing chapter! Onto the next one!

~Rayne

This has been fun:-). Starting sequel!

SORA. ANNA TOO. AHHHHH SO MUCH IS GOING ON AND I CAN BARELY COMPREHEND ANYTHING. XD

I REMEMBER THIS.

THIS IS THE ONLY FLUFF I HAVE REALLY GOTTEN IN ALL OF YOUR STORIES.

GOD I NEED MORE.

~Rayne

Badass Olaf is the utmost amazing highlight of this story. X'D Jus' sayin'. I saw Hans shit comin' from a mile awaaay.

~Rayne

I AM PRETTY SURE THIS WAS WHERE I LEFT OFF LAST TIME BECAUSE I REMEMBER HANS BEING A DICK AND REVEALING HE WAS WORKING WITH THE HEARTLESS. FUCKER.

On a side note, I always pictured Elsa calling her parents Mother and Father rather than Mom and Dad. Mom and Dad seems like it would suit Anna more. Just a little thing I'm like to share. XD

Great chapteeeer.

~Rayne