If you could stop villanising the natives that would be great. It's bad enough we have to deal with Meyer's racist undertones.

Your rendition of a Texan accent is horrible lol not gonna sugarcoat it, it was closer to the Irish than country in any way. Plus the constant use of 'fucker' was atrocious.

But my Leah baby!

Ahhhh that explains why you're vampires have quite a few differences if you've only seen the first two movies.

Yeah you definitely altered twilight vampires since they can fall unconscious now.

Oh so you have changed the Vampires abilities/natures. I thought you just forgot about the food/drink thing, but your Vampires actually have blood that can be drank by other vampires when the Twilight Vampires don't, they just have venom - no blood.

Though you doing that implies vampires could live off eating other vampires.

What is it with people forgetting ALL human food and drink is disgusting to vampires...including cognac and bourbon. It doesn't really matter, but it just seems really silly to forget something that obvious/mentioned.

I can’t wait to see you other BellaSulpicia story haha. Thanks for this amazing story! This is so so good~

So glad Paul is dead. Yay for the mates!

This was brilliant. Brilliantly written as well.
As much of a fan I am of Esme Cullen I am, I enjoyed seeing how manipulative and cruel she was in this fic. Thank you

throw her.
I would hope you would update Beyond the Forge since we have been waiting for four years.

Did you stop getting reviews for Beyond the Forge ,is that why you stopped updating it four years ago?
Never understood why Alice looks like a ten year old boy after her change when everyone else becomes enhanced and more sexier especially the females.
I cannot believe that both Demetri and Felix are such cowards.
So where is Alec and are they letting Jane dissociate down in the dungeon?
Denali is the plural.

Will Peter be showing up to tell the Queens what happened to her?
Can they not smell the squirrel munchers scent on the things she brought with her?
I gather since Quil is dead the imprint is broken and Claire is out from under the wolves thrall?
What will Emily do,will she figure out what is gonna on and save herself?
How about updating that B/T story.
It looks like her second gift seems similar to Alec's gift just that It only effect one person at a time,so far.
Alec seems to be forgotten with all that has been going on?
Has Bella learned to play the violin yet?
Has Sulpicia used a strap- On yet?
Have anymore of the mutts died?
Has Emily figured out what they have been doing to her and Kim yet?

i think she needs to find one of her asshole fathers pistols and blow Paul's nuts off.
I am just sad that she had to suffer because of those assholes she was stuck with.
Hopefully when Bella is turned she will come back and wipe out the whole pack and that group of old bastards on the tribal council.

Both Sulpicia and Isabelle are awesome badass! Coolest mate! Thank you for writing this amazing, magnificent, fantastic, wonderful and brilliant masterpiece! I will never forget this bcoz I really love this story so muchhhh. Bella and Sulpicia 333