I love this start to the story! Mabel and Stanley Pines interacting has always been one of my favourtie things and i'm curious to know why exactly Mabel is on the run.

I'll be sure to check out more of your story.

This is soooooooooooooooooo AWESOME!

I loved this story, but I'm curious as to what happens now. Do Mabel and Dipper stay with their dad or with Stan? Do they keep in contact? I love this story and now I have so many questions. Amazing job!

buen fanfic-good fanfic

Aw! Such a cute ending! Sorry I took so long to review this

Well done

Oh my gosh I love this story so much, I'm sad it's over! But I love that you updated so regularly, and that you thanked everyone for following! I love your work and please continue to write wonderful fanfictions!

You had a good story here. I couldn't help but wonder what will happen next in the story.
You ended the story here well. But I have a suggestion...perhaps maybe you can continue the lives of the twins and their dad in Gravity Falls, like in a sequel story? Besides, we never got a chance to meet Ford...and in this story, I wonder what relation the twins really have with Stan (are they not related?).

well done loved it

awwww, that's such a sweet ending! I really loved reading this - it was a fun ride. :D

Loved it:-). Great happy ending overall.

That was a beautiful ending. :)

I love how this story ended! Thank you for writing an AMAZING story. :)

Loved it! So happy their dad was a good guy!

Sweet ending...

I read the whole chapter while in the lunch line. Good way to pass the time.