Reviews for Falling Apart
PepperonyOwl chapter 27 . 6/1
Just found this and read it all in one go (instead of sleeping, ironically enough). I really love this. its such a well rounded person and love her confession, poor Legolas though.

thanks for taking the time to write and publish this. I am excited for more. and congrats on your wedding
theansweris3 chapter 27 . 5/13
Love it!

I just found this story today and read it all! I'm already fully invested!
GaaraSandNiN chapter 26 . 4/17
Hi! I really hope you continue this. I love it so much. Thank you for sharing this with us. Hope all is well.
~GaaraSandNiN
PrettyRecklessLaura chapter 27 . 4/5
Can't wait for more!
Mediocre Dunces chapter 27 . 4/3
I am very impressed by Alyssa's resilience and how you depict her interactions with the other characters. Thank you for writing and sharing!
Vienna22 chapter 27 . 3/4
I can’t believe it took me this long to find this fanfic! Truly amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter! 3
d'elfe chapter 27 . 3/4
Ah, that was a great last line !
I'm so glad Alyssa is free from Saruman's influence. He's been draining her so badly.

I am glad as well that Legolas wants to speak about... you know. Go, elf, don't be shy !
They are so cute together, really.

As usual, this was very well written. Cheers !
daughterofthechief chapter 27 . 2/29
As always, you never fail to exceed my expectations with every update- this story keeps getting better and better and it has been so nice to witness the quality of your writing evolve over the years. And this ship... Legolas staying with her and protecting her, even in her dreams, in addition to being disappointed when she forgot her confession to him makes me want to scream at how sweet that is. I wonder if he knows the extent of his feelings for her or if they are just starting to develop out of a platonic tenderness. Thanks so much for updating! I absolutely loved it and am so looking forward to Alyssa's recovery and the moment she tells Legolas of her intention to go on with the Fellowship.
Ookamihime Ichimaru chapter 27 . 2/24
Yes yes yes! I’m so happy this got updated! I really love this fic and I jus gotta know more! So much I’m dreaming about it!
Ookamihime Ichimaru chapter 26 . 1/24
This...is so gooooooood! Like it’s hard to find a good fix now a days and I’m sooo glad I found this one! Can’t wait for the next update!
Ookamihime Ichimaru chapter 19 . 1/24
Allysa:oooop *makes witty remarks, slips down tree and falls on him*
Legolas: this one. This one right here. Back off cause this ones mine.
daughterofthechief chapter 26 . 1/12
Ahhh I am so excited you updated! And with such an update too... I can't believe she's finally admitted and I loved how you wrote with such subtly about his reactions to her confession. Alyssa is such a heartbreaking character and your writing is so effective in making us see things from her perspective with regards to her relationship with Legolas. And Legolas's characterization is so amazing as well- he is so tender and protective of her but also enigmatic as to whether he feels platonic or romantically toward her at this current stage. I also love it when he pulls rank on her ;) I honestly can't express to you how pleased I was to see you had started updating again and it was of such good quality too. Thank you so much and looking forward to next update xx
jewels369 chapter 26 . 1/11
Well, I guess the cats outta the bag now! Fricken finally, I was worried that no one would of found out about the dark voices!
Also, I'm so glad you decided to post this chapter even without fully "liking" the way it turned out, because in my opinion it's a really good chapter to start the year with! One of my teachers told me that it's easy to read your work and find many things to dislike, but that's just because you are desensitized to your own work. The readers, in contrast, don't see everything behind the scenes and enjoy the plotline because it's new/good. So don't worry too heavily about lack of formal knowledge or discontent with the chapters, things will settle properly!
Hope that Alyssa doesn't have a conniption when she is all healed up! (And I hope Legolas takes his "blackmail" knowledge and goes easy on poor Lyss haha)
LoveKitaSoMuch chapter 26 . 1/11
Awww... shit.
Guest chapter 26 . 1/8
The rape part in the beginning kind of ruined this story for me :(
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