I really like the whole thing here. Would be nice if you could continue it, even though it has been so long.

I know it’s been more than three and a half years since you’ve updated this and the odds of it being continued are nil, but I just binge-read this (again, for the umpteenth time) and it’s still an absolutely spectacular read. I wish there’s more (especially after a cliffhanger like that).

Dude I love ur stories. I am literally addicted! I’m really looking forward to how the next chapter will play out. (If you are still continuing this book) Hope to see your next update!

I'm crying because. Even though I rationally understand Adam concern, if I saw this on my eye it's really sad because the only thing I think is the word 'Unwanted' Allen in his world. Is suffer enough in his even here he's also danger. But he know his place, his place is not here. It's really wonderful story!

two years since last update. STILL FRICKING AWESOME GAHD YES.

Fudge. I almost cried. Which is pretty hard to make me do, if it's a fanfic. First time, ever. Agh.

Very nice story!

please update

I hope you continue this. I want to see what happens next

This fic is fantastic and I hope you continue it :)!

Oooooh shiiiiit

'leading him to wonder if his synchronization with his Innocence was unusually weak.' this amuses me.

This whole story is just brilliant, and I really hope that you will update again soon!
The emotions are heartwrenching, and Adam in this chapter was scary but understandably so. And now with the characters thrown into a loop with Allen not being able to get back to his own world, tensions are bound to rise on every side, can't wait to see how this will pan out.
Looking forward to more!

I absolutely love this story, it's compelling, and the characters are perfectly spot on. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

This story is so... wonderful, I can't wait to know what will happen now ! The Ark door didn't open, how will Adam react ? I'm sure Allen is feeling quite... threatened by his presence, even if Neah and Mana are here. I feel like... one day, everything will turn for the worst, if nothing change. So please, I beg you, you have to update this fanfic, or I'll die !
Elogane ~