The story is great, so please update soon!

Wait, you mean you abandoned this for 2 years? I would be surprised, but that happens quite a few times on this site.

Yeah, writer's block sucks.

Wait, why is Undyne Frisk's favorite monster to fight? And I think that Reaper!Chara has made Frisk (the normal one) and Chara more DETERMINED to not do True Genocide.

So Gaster is alive in this timeline? That will make for an interesting boos fight.

Wait, why do they fight Undyne the Undying? That only happens if you try to attack Monster Kid.

I like this.
Also, can you send this message to Papyrus and Sans?
I actually like Sans' puns. They are very... punny. *Badum-tss*

Wait, how does Chara know the punchline? And congratulations on 130 reviews!

I think it's really good so far!

Mine is Megalo Strike Back. My second is either Megalovania or Bonetrousle.

Good point. And you are really good at writing Charisk fluff. It's like Rick Riordan writing Percabeth.

I do like the story! And I feel like Frisk is trying to do a good thing, but the process makes it bad. You know what I mean?

You are doing it right, and I would favorite but I don't have an account.

Keep up the good work! Stay Determined!

Were their personalities not supposed to change? I thought they were changing because they were realizing that their way of thinking had been wrong this whole time since they were doing a pacifist run. It has been a while since I last read the story but I did get annoyed occasionally with how the plurals would keep switching from singular to plural so thank you for saying that you'll be revising that.