Reviews for Kim Possible : Developments
ClassyUlysses chapter 23 . 3/18
I wander if Ron stuck staying with yori?
Guest chapter 8 . 4/9/2018
Not a bad story so far, but you really need a beta reader.
romeosami7 chapter 30 . 8/23/2017
yori is moron, asking ron to abandon a person in neee, where's your honor now? the ending made no sense.
Your father chapter 31 . 6/14/2017
I stand by my previous review son. Don't take it to heart and don't let your teeny bopper reviewers hugbox the shit out of you.
Opt chapter 31 . 5/10/2017
That last commentor was a douche. Interesting fanfic and i liked it
Your father chapter 31 . 4/11/2017
God damn it son, you did it again. Let's be honest, you made Ron a giant bitch. You also made Kim a cunt. So when you do two things like that, on a fic that revolves around the success of their relationship. It falls apart. It was too drawn out and overly dramatic. There was no literal purpose in cucking Ron throughout 30 chapters of this bullshit story. You're the reason I left your mother.

0.5/10
Gold Testament chapter 25 . 4/8/2017
I thought for sure Monique wanting to help her closest friends would've spilled her guts about the trap Felix put her in and she found out why Ron rejects and resents her.
Gold Testament chapter 24 . 4/8/2017
Jarvis is like another Ron. Wonder how Josh would feel hearing that though? That Ron refuses Kim because he's afraid of being hurt and abandoned by her again. To be fair she doesn't have the best track record of loyalty.
Gold Testament chapter 22 . 4/8/2017
I side with Ron on this one. I mean Kim constantly pushed him aside for hotties.
Gold Testament chapter 20 . 4/8/2017
Kim and Ron are Wade's main friends.
Gold Testament chapter 17 . 4/8/2017
Wonder how Kim will feel knowing she destroyed her friends?
Gold Testament chapter 9 . 4/8/2017
Tara isn't thinking much... She may not have him as her boyfriend, but she can still have him as a friend and get close to him.
Gold Testament chapter 8 . 4/8/2017
BOOM! KP HAS TOTALLY DESTROYED HER YEARS WITH RON, AND HAS PUSHED HIM INTO THE ARMS OF HER BEST FRIEND!
Gold Testament chapter 7 . 4/8/2017
Wow I bet Eric will dump Kim after she sleeps with him.
Gold Testament chapter 6 . 4/8/2017
They both need to be direct, Tara doesn't know how right she was to lash out at Ron at lunch, it was exactly what he needed to gain a new bro and someone to possibly replace Kim. With Monique... All I ever really saw was Kim's wing woman that had a couple of interests similar to Ron, but won't hang with him solo. Guys like Ron don't get hints, they need to be told straight up.
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