Cute story.

loved it very thank you

Aw, this was adorable! I really liked how well you nailed Bill and Charlie's characterisations at the beginning, with you keeping in line a certain cheeky, rebel-like persona for Charlie and a more serious one for Bill. I find it very believable that Bill would form so much of an infatuation with Hermione, whereas for Charlie it may just be a passing crush - or an interest purely grown out of his brothers' interest!

Charlie coming to the rescue - what a hero! I love how you've fundamentally done a great job at keeping themes of family as well as relationships here, as it could have easily been perceived as an anti-family fic from the start.

This was a wonderfully cute read. Great job!

I'm so loving this new story, but I always enjoy reading your stories, thanks ever so much.

Sweet story:-)

Awww such a cute story. I love how possessive Bill got and how nervous he was around Hermione. Thanks for writing!