Please continue! It's very good!

Don’t give up. Such a good story.

I think you are amazing, I tried to make a Percico falls into Tartarus, I didn't do so well

Like it

Nice premise. However the flow of the story gets interrupted. I'd recommend waiting till you have 1000 words before you post each chapter. Also, you seem to use many lines from the books. I recommend you use a little more originality. Ex. A son of Hades dying in Tartarus as he tried to stop a son of Poseidon from drowning. This line is very very similar to a line in House of Hades.

it might help if you just wait until you have at least a thousand words before you post a new chapter, it will take longer but the story will be better in the long run if you don't rush it.

There is a grammar error in your story description!

Yes, this chapter is insanely short *glares at the author*
Anyway... I usually don't read Percico fanfics, because I don't ship it... BUT THIS IS AMAZING! I love the idea, I love this fanfiction... But please, could chapters be a bit longer? *puppy dog eyes*

Hey! So I've read the summary and the first chapter and I thought— this is a GREAT idea! Omg! I love Perch/Nico fanfics and yours is so original... That's really good!

Your writing is nice (though a little longer chapters would be better) and I can't wait to see how you'll portray Nico being all this time alone with Percy or the moment when they get together!

Anyways, thumbs up from me and I hope you update soon! :)

Cool idea, as a shipper of almost everything (minus Percy/Artemis or her hunters, I hate that)