You're psychic. You predicted what would happen in chapter 65.

This was a fun read. But I think you should leave it as it is. Not many places you could really take it.

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Seems like a pretty good platform that you could work off of, hope to see more

This should absolutely continue on! It was wonderfully written, and I don't think Rito was OOC at all, so don't worry. There's way too few TLR stories in here, so seeing a good one is great news! Please continue on!

Please continue

great job, continue on if you get more ideas and make some stories about rito with one of the other girls.

Like the story and like how you made your version of Rito.

Great story, it made me smile and laugh at certain points, and the explanation to why Rito trips makes a lot of sense.

So...why the "M" rating?