| Reviews for Black Swan |
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PastOneonta chapter 1 . 5/22/2018 What a beautiful loving love story. I truly love the way you wrote Emma and Killian. She needed time and he was patient. They both had loss and pain in their lives and knew what it was like to be alone. I loved Killian with Henry, and David and MM as good friends. This was very good, and the setting of ballet made it special. Thanks for writing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2016 It's amazing! You mixed the two things I love most; Captain Swan and ballet! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2016 Thanks for this story |
Atruthuniversally chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 This was amazing. Beautifully written! |
SLimac chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 So beautiful! This is amazing! I'm a sucker for anything ballet, having been a competative dancer myself, and this was perfect! I only wish it could have been longer so I could have lived in this world a while more. Wonderful job! Well done! |
OnceUponASarcasticSinger chapter 1 . 2/15/2016 I'm just sitting here in awe of this beautiful story that you've written here and I'm just completed in love with this fic! If it wasn't midnight I would go and read all of your other CaptainSwan stories, so I'll just do it tomorrow when I wake up Truly amazing! |
vladelena chapter 1 . 2/15/2016 Beautiful and touching! Keep writing, please! |
delenalu chapter 1 . 2/14/2016 Reading practically all I could find wrote by you, I think I'm able now to identify the hallmarks of your writing: semantic nuances, a fluid and delicate manner of writing, these explanatory parenthesis so typical of you (that bring to us some insides in the characters minds, with a subtle change of perspective that enlightens many things, that enlightens all!), and - I have to say! - Emotions. Please do not stop writing: you have a special gift that can not be wasted. Would be a shame! About this story, it is somewhat predictable, but that does not cause any harm to the tale itself, so you do not write stories, you write emotions! It's because of that the peak of this story is reached just in the two final rows: "He stays for breackfast the next morning. He never leaves." So beautiful! |
gaudeamusigitur chapter 1 . 2/14/2016 Just great! Welcome back! |
buffybabe42 chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Please consider me a fan. |
Lisa1972 chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 awwww... |
Senie chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 Ah-maze-zing (it was so good I had to add a second z)! |
fox24 chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 Adorable and good idealistic one shot |
delenalu chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 I can not find enough words to say how I enjoy your return! I'm not familiar with "Once Upon a Time", I don't know the characters' backgrounds, I don't know their history, their psychological profile is obscure for me - my only connection (but what a wonderful connection!) to the story is only you and your prodigious literary style, a perfect and delicate mixture of psychological subtlety and artistic sensibility. I wonder now (and I wondered every time I read something written by you) if you're not actually a famous writer, who searches in the fanfiction world the emotion of a direct connection with the readers. Because of the beauty of your writing I'm pretty sure that's exactly the truth. I'll be back with an attempt to review, this is only an unstoppable reaction to the vivid emotion caused by your return. :) |
wordsmith-storyweaver chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 It's not often that I'm rendered speechless by any piece of writing, but all save one word on this story would be superlative nonsense: STUNNING! |