Bout time you did something to this story. I was thinking you'd abandoned it.

Good to know u arnt dead

Yaaay, babies! Fear not Serena, I'm sure you'll do just fine. What could possibly go wrong?

I feel like Kale's mom is dead. I'm calling it right now.

But that was a pretty good fight! Score one for the nerds! :D Are they gonna fight the Gym Leader next...? I feel like they are. That'll be good.

Oh come on! Really?! Two chapters? Dangit hurry up and add more...

That battle was epic! I kinda voted for the Delphox though...

Good story so far, King! I'm interested to see what happens next! Though, if I were to say one thing, you should try to use line breaks to show transitions. So far, the transitions between locations and times have been kinda weird- some kind of line break should fix that! Other than that, good work! :3

Hehehehehehehe X3