Not bad but lol Melissa McCarthy lol that chick funny lol nice job

that was funny Tatsuki got involved Yay she's awesome would have been funnier if they were all asleep on him but oh well still a great story Keigo would be so jealous lol

Great job! Nothing or no one is out of character and the harem was excellent keep the story going

That damn pill wrecks everything!

I loved this! The characterization is dead-on, the lemons and comedy are perfectly blended in the style of Bleach.

You've done a wonderful job with this story and I sure hope you make more.

Awesome

Orihime acts like she want that D. Lmfao Ichigo gt.

Nice!