Ugh, I'm crying. What a beautiful piece!

The angst hurts real good.

Damn! How dare you. I started crying after reading just the third of it. This is so heartwrenching, It was like I directly felt how Bishamon felt. Such great writing. And it's 2am at that. All the feels came crushing down. Splendid piece this is. Truly magnificent.

...wellp, I'm ready for the sweet embrace of death. :'D

In all seriousness, amazing job with this story

*cries*
why so saaaaaaaaaad

I cried ;w;
I love every single interaction here and you give Kinuha some spotlight(?)! I really love it! Great job

Such a beautiful angst and on my birthday too :')) Bless the timing~ I can't help but imagine Kazuma's singing voice as you mentioned here, then I listened to their character song right after to refresh my idea haha to be honest, the first person I can think of to replace Kazuma was Kuraha, but the idea of Kinuha works wonders too and of course them working together is a must. You portrayed it really well~

I can say, Kazuma would really be irreplaceable. (just like my favorite villian from Psycho-Pass but thats another story lol) I'm worried about Bishamon during this latest arc, but I'm pretty sure she can be saved (because Ebisu all over again) I'm more worried about Kazuma to be honest..