It was really nice to see this side of Roy! Good work!

This is a well written story and I really enjoyed the end.

I really enjoyed reading this! It was nice to read about Ed taking pride in his accomplishments for once and I love the way Roy and Riza were ready to mentor and give him that little bit of praise. Great work!

Awww! loved this, you nailed the characters.

This was great! It was so well written, I could hear their voices! I know this is a one shot but I really want to see the ball!

D'aaaaaaaw, I would lov to see more of this! The paternal!RoyaiEd is totally sweet, I loved how Roy didn't tease Ed for once but took everything very seriously. I think Ed very much appreciated the tips and I would have loved to see him (as well as Roy and Maes) shuffle around and make sure to kiss some ass, protect their dates and get the slow dance with them :D

Also, I totally grinned at the Canis awesome! Nice detail. And the sentence about how Roy looked like he would escort a beautiful lady - HELL YES HE DOES! :D

I really liked this!
I'd kinda like to see something of a sequel to this- at least Ed's reaction to how Winry looks, and her reaction to Ed in uniform, and then maybe how the ball goes. Obviously you don't have to if you don't want to, but it would be really nice if you did :)

I read this on Tumblr yesterday and I loved it! I always enjoy reading Ed's thought process when it comes to Winry, and of course Roy and Riza as parental figures just fits so well!

I liked it, it's a moment that should be treasured and just awww. Roy and Riza taking care of Ed and that pride. :)