The whole story is great...the ending is unexpected but this means I will do research whether this fiction is continued...

Huh? It started out so rich and full of promise. Even if they didn't get an hea the ending brushed over all the bits you spent so much time making us anxious for especially the control, possession and the busting of the three embezzlers. Thanks for the story.

oh wow. This was a surprising ending. But refreshing

This was good,, so steamy, the author has written more detailed version to this on her own fan fiction, moutaintop76

Wow that was so hot! I'd like to think that even though she works somewhere else that they eventually have a relationship! I need those happy endings! Thx so much for still writing Fanfiction. I'm bedridden and I need it in my life in order to escape. God Bless!
Anita (Atwiggs)

This was great and I hope it continues! Can't believe she would leave without talking to him!

Please continue! Soooooo goooood!

Thank you!

Butttttttt! He surely isn't going to just let her leave?!

I loved this story and didn't want it to end!

A friend (and fellow fanfic fan) rec'd that I read some of the stories in this contest. Well - I really enjoy Twilight fanfic and love this particular theme. Therefore, after reading a random couple of the stories, I decided to just start at the top of the list and read them all. Your story is very close to the bottom of page 1 of 2 so along with initial random stories, your tale is about the 15th or so I have read - This is the first review I have felt compelled to write . MOUNTAINTOP76 - No doubt, undisputedly the BEST of all of the ones I have read so far - both in storyline and quality of writing. You drew me in immediately and I was hooked on every single word. The way you ended the story left NO DOUBT that this story is BEGGING to be allowed to continue playing out to fruition. Edward may be a powerful man accustomed to always having what he wants freely given to him ... Or otherwise he just takes it. And Bella is a strong independent woman that has a career-path laid out and she intends to follow it until one day she inhabits an office on the top floor. It is obvious to Edward that Bella is ambitious and goes after what she wants because of her determination to bring the errors to him in the first place ... So while he will NOT like what IS HIS walking away (actually REALLY NOT LIKE IT), he actually has deep respect for her depth of self-worth and ambition. BUT - if she thinks she is going to walk out of that elevator for the last time leaving behind her old job as well as all things Edward in her past ... She best think again. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! IT IS BEGGING TO BE TOLD.

Congratulations! You won 1st place in ALL CATEGORIES (in my humble opinion!)

Will you be continuing this work it's fabulous

I have mixed feelings about this. Firstly, I absolutely loved the story, plot and language is good. Secondly, I loved the unexpected ending. But it made sense. And finally, will there be sequel? As much as I liked the ending, I would like them to be together.

I hope you have more planned for this :)

loved this. please add more!