Any chance of thriller bark arc?

Update? Please?

I like this! I really like Zoro and Luffy’s dynamic. I’m looking forward for more. Maybe have Zoro’s POV? And maybe Luffy too?

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

I enjoyed this chalter fully. It really made me think about how ZORO felt during these whole ordeals. At the end it made me think, maybe Zoro's coping mechanism was like a mother hen. "I need to keep all of my chicks together to keep them safe" even though he didn't show it, maybe Zoro felt some sort of subconscious fear of losing another crew mate.

Now this was a nice touch. Through Chopper's perspective, in the last chapter, there was no indication that the original three were nervous and out of their zones, and it makes sense as little Tony was in shock himself and it was only the small uncharacterisc mannerisms that told Nami how Luffy and Zoro felt, our cute doctor can't pick up just yet.

Anyway, loving these "multiple perspectives" chapters of the same chain of events and really glad you decided to go with it. :D

Well, first mate's gotta do what a first mate's gotta do. And it is surprising how hope can make things better. Good job!

Awesome job! I am loving this series so far. Keep up the good work.

good chap

Love the focus on the big 3...Luffy...the Zoro...then Nami...they are the main ones that sort of keep everyone afloat...

I'm loving how you're including everyone's reactions to a very VERY stressful moment

and I do find some of it hard to follow and a little disorganized until I realized just what moment(s) you're trying to convey here.

the strawhats are NOT proactive, they are all REACTING to the world government, Robin "leaving", their ship dying, Usopp choosing to leave them. There is no time to logical think things out. There is only NOW. Now go and tell everyone Merry is dying. Now watch the captain and pretty much his best friend fight. Now watch one of the oldest members leave. Now watch the world government take your friend away.

and your writing style reflects the chaos of it and it's so lovely

Sweet sweet Tony Tony Chopper
Always sad reading about this part
Especially from Chopper's point of view
He's so confused and sad
There was nothing the crew could have done after Usopp got into that fight

And helping Robin at that point would have been impossible too
Cos she was against them(for their safety/ lies /Wold Government sucks)
Her trauma from that buster call must be why she was tricked like that...

Even after all this time
I still say Spandam must die
His father too, if possible

Chopper dear
You are a part of them
You're their Pet/Emergency food suply
LoL jk jk

When you catch up chapter wise to the reverie arc...I rely wanna here about Vivi again...until then...Usopp POV soon?

Poor Chopper...at least they know what to do next.

Ah Chopper, everything will work out in the end. Oh and that part where Luffy just can't follow plans is hilarious and so accurate that it makes it even more funny. Really enjoyed the chapter, thanks for updating.