Great story

Great introduction to some important female characters. I'm interested in how the story will evolve further.

Although I am not really familiar with the World of Warcraft lore, I followed your story with an interest so far and liked most of it. I didn't always understand the motivation of all the characters (especially Uther's risk of his few able men to return the corpse of the dead king), I still found this passage touching and feel sorry for the old Paladin. Keep it up.

Great story, I like it very much! What I like most is that you're writing it as realistic as possible, and dark. I can already tell that this is some serious storytelling. ;)

Nice uptade on the story! Keep it up!

I'm really starting to like Asher. He lost everything, but he will fight til the end to defend his kingdom, no matter he felt like an outsider there before. Great chapter and character development of the main character.

In this particular chapter, we found out that there is still some hope for a great Kingdom of Lordaeron and we meet on of the realm's greatest heroes, Lord Uther the Lightbringer...
Also, we see how much Asher is still immature and impulsive, that he is still just a child prone to temper tantrums. Instead of feeding himself constantly on self-pity and thinking he is tragically misunderstood by the rest of the world (often behaviour for young person of his age), Asher will be required to grow up abruptly and make himself useful for the cause, to grow as a simbol of hope in this dark times. Let's just hope he will realize this in time. Otherwise, a great chapter.

In this chapter, we learn more about the things that are concerning our hero, we understand his attitude towards his brother with more sympathy... Brilliant storytelling so far, you did not waste too much time to get us straight into action. I can only hope the story will continue with the same quality and pace.

A promising start to the story, I will certainly keep an eye on this. Maybe I'm wrong, but Asher seems a bit bitter to me.

So far this hast just been a retelling of wc3... The only thing with the actual MC, is that he likes his pony. He's angry and useless. He left his home to theramore. The end.

well originally the scarlet crusade was not that bad it became that bad after alexandros morgain was betrayed and killed by a dreadlord posing as one of his oldest friends and his oldest son.

Interesting story. I'm not sure where you're going with this, but I'm liking so far.

Why do you not put 'the' in all the places it needs to be, it sounds like caveman speak

You need to not skip words, you don't add a lot of ing's and ed's where you should and you don't bother typing some of the smaller words, making this kind of jarring to read

Oh boy, scarlet crusader, I cannot help but to dislike the path Asher is taking. Scarlets are bastards that should not exist in any timeline, in my opinion. in fact I dislike them in pure hatred for their blind loyalty and zealotry and constant hatred of other races other than humans. in fact in my WoW server :Argent Dawn there was one man which made me dislike them entirely. I really hope Asher will open his eyes for the truth.