“Olivia kissed him gently. "Get your crown back and we can talk. I don't fraternize with commoners."’ Dying! LOL

Olivia and Eli are so perfect. You are such a good writer. my only hang up is how you always mention Olivia having dark skin. Is that like for white people standards because she doesn't really have dark skin at all.

I lived this fic. I laughed, I cried. Damn, Elise reminds me of myself when I was a little girl.
Her personality is a perfect mix of El and Liv.
I think I'll never forget that scene when Elliot finds Liv soaked in blood with that guy dead above her.

Wow!

Another great fic, thank you for sharing your works and keeping the EO fire!

okay! so this is that real shit. this story is fire.

Love it

I would definitely like to see Elise as a sixteen year old. That would be a good read

I feel bad that I haven’t reviewed this yet but I love this story and have read it probably 10 times. It’s really hard to find an established eo fic or one that doesn’t end right after they get together. I feel like you really captured the characters personalities while giving readers what they want to read as well. Wondering if you have ever considered writing another fic that continues in this universe?

GAH! I was going to review every chapter but once I got started I just couldn't stop reading! I read this story AGES ago and had it stuck in my head but couldn't remember the name of it. I literally went through every single story on this site to find it! So glad I did! I absolutely love it! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Well written, in character and great story! Thank you so much for writing this!

Just spent the last few days reading all of this.. I won't lie, there were a few times I wanted to quit, I hate angst between Elliot and Olivia. This story definitely had it's fair share of it too, but I resolved that I'd made it through as far as I did and I was going to finish it. Now I'm absolutely thrilled that I did! This was a great story, like all of your stories!

I absolutely loved this story! I just read it from beginning to the end! I wish there was more!

I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Everything was written perfectly and I felt like I was in each and every scene. I ran through every emotion with this story, I laughed, cried and even got a little frustrated sometimes. I would love to read a sequel, just to see how Elise evolves as she gets older. Anyways, thanks for a great story and can't wait to read some of your other work.

P.S. You write some of the greatest smut I have read. Keep up the good work!

You are the best and i'm waiting for the sequel ;)

Oh come on,

Great story, little disappointed with the way it ended but glad they got married in the end.

Elise was great, so funny the whole way.

Thanks for the story, will read more of your stories

Great chapter

I loooooooved this story so much! It was really a work of art and labor of love! I miss Stabler. I wish he'd never left. They were so magical together, right? If only he hadn't gone back to Kathy and instead has pursued Liv! But, this story absolutely makes up for all of that! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Feel free to start a sequel ya know!